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AW COME ON!!! WHO IS IT?!

Nice - interesting plot and I like the idea of Enigma being a total unknown. I initially thought it was Atemu, but then another thought struck...

Is it Yugi? That would be just so cool. :)

Anyway, great story, and please update when you can.

Ja!

As a writer myself, I know how it is to want reviews, so when I read this, I just had to give you a piece of my mind. (It's positive, never fear!) Though I often see Yami in the highly sexed roles - like being a slut or being a porn star - that didn't deter me, and you characterize him as more independent, not some needy prostitute. I like him that way. I also love seeing he and Yugi showing interest in one another, and that their relationship is developing more realistically, not just them hopping in bed right this second. It's nice to read a fic devoid of those cliches.

And then there's that hint of Joey's crush on Seto... I hope that goes somewhere in the future. I will be interested to see not only how their possible relationship progresses, but how the action goes. So far, the plot is mounting nicely, not overly fast but certainly not tedious. I'm intrigued, so please keep it up!

Great start to a story! I love the way the characters are developing their own personalities. I also like that you are holding off on the lemon. It would have been intrusive in this chapter, much tastier later. (Good things do come to those that wait...)

And if I haven't waited for this chapter! It took some time, but it's nice, please update soon? Pretty please? Or even pretty please with sugar on top? Love it, keep going ^^

Well, I'm interested. ^_^ I can't think of anything to say other than "Keep writing!" so that's all I'll put for now.

As for 'Dakku', if I remember correctly the only place I've seen it before is on ff.net in LeDiz's fic Reaping the Reward . . . if that helps any.


~LS

RD: ah its the classic tail of Robbin hood in the Remake the only difference is theres no romance from two different sides of the field for one and two there skills extend to beyond taking back what another had already stolen case in point the assasinations bombings and whatnot but so long as those actions are legit then im cool with them not that it really matters i mean Outlaw Star has one assasin and one who could whipe the floor with anyone cant remember her name but she a kitara kitara empire member just cant remember her name right now huh oh well keep up the great work and update as soon as humanly possible thank you hehe and really keep up the great work this is interesting to say the least hehe JA NE ^___^