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for One Dance

by ladywolfTerri

person Draza
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* phew...that was HOTTT!!!!! The ppor wall...and bed. Yay cream puff!!! *skitters to corner to eat cream puff* oh! *with a mouth full of cream puff* please cotinue in this story SOON!!!
person Lady Laran
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*happy dance* Yugi and Yami!!! YAY!!!!! I loved that chapter! I can't wait to see what more you're going to come up with!
person kenz
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it I want m/m and b/r now!
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another great chapter, and a damn sexy lemon! I would've reviewed on FFN, but when I checked the chapter was up but I couldn't reach the page. Oh well, at least you update here ^.^ I'll probably end up reviewing on FFN anyway. That he left the window open was too funny, though I'm glad Yugi took it so well. Amused that he was so happy to see Yami as well. Heh heh, Marik and Bakura probably won't let them forget that any time soon...
person RYOU MOON
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so good update very soon please!!!!
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic, I'm enjoying it a lot. I particularly love your characterization of Malik--so cutely hyper! I look forward to reading the next chapter.
person click
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally u need to update faster
person moe
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic...I'm not really into the whole multiple couples thing, but I love Yugi and Yami...there so sweet...I can't wait for the next chappie!!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why are they bothering with clothes? They're just gonna end up naked anyway! LMAO! (someone better have a camera handy! *grin*)
Great chapter!
person Kenz
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once agian I liek I like alot!!!!
update soon please ^.^