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for One Dance

by ladywolfTerri

person Dark Angel of Fire Ice
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee, on ff.net this fic is on my favorites list. ^_^ Hee, great lemon. Seriously great lemon. And the basterd deserved it for touching Yugi. XD XP I can't wait 'till the next chappie. This fic so rocks.
person LadyGrey
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya, I want a cream puff! Heehee. Also want to say awesome update, and super hot lemon! Man... maybe Yugi's a bit of a closet exhibitionist, ya think? That'd be interesting. Okay, so about the pics, I've posted them in Drac's Vault, the yahoo group. In the Misc pics album, the ones I'm talking about are the first five on the third page, or if you just hit "Show All" they're the nineth row down. It occured to me, however, that these aren't the original pics I was talking about, so I must have another cd somewhere -- when I find it and the other pics, I'll let you know! Okay, keep writing, love it, ja ne!
person LadyGrey
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aha, found the orginials... they're uploaded now, the bottom row on the fourth page or, with Show All, the 16th row down at Drac's Vault under Misc. Just reminds me so much of hyper Malik-chan! Okay ja.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter, I loved the cheering at the end! Is Yugi made of taffy? *snicker*
Where's my cream puff now? Yum!
person Sarah Costa
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was GREAT!!! I LOVE IT!!! Please more. PLEASE!!! Ja ne
person yami nefertira
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great story, ryou and yugi were sweet, marik, malik, bakura and ryou were cute , funny and hot together. yami and yugi-whay-they got together yahoo.
and full of lemony goodness, me likey. i love this story, and i think ryous aunt and uncle were mean. but way to go everyone yayayayya
great story and well done. ^_^
person yami nefertira
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great story, ryou and yugi were sweet, marik, malik, bakura and ryou were cute , funny and hot together. yami and yugi-whay-they got together yahoo.
and full of lemony goodness, me likey. i love this story, and i think ryous aunt and uncle were mean. but way to go everyone yayayayya
great story and well done. ^_^
person Lee
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so I hate to say it, but ... well ... this last chapter started and ended just fine, but the middle?
Cheese.
I'm happy that they were finaly intimate, but in the middle of the party? I thought that Yami would have a little more class than that.
I just thought that it might have been rushed. I'm sorry, don't take the cream puff away.
person Ralphiere
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! Let's get this party started, sweetie, and get writing *cracks whip*.

Su

BTW... can I have coffee with my cream puff?
person aspiker
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...cream puffs

The lemon was great. I especially love the bit about Yami leaving the window open and Bakura and Marik cheering them when they finished. 8-)