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for One Dance

by ladywolfTerri

person mrmangafan
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say I have greatly enjoyed this story. Normally I'm not into stories about 3-somes (not to mention 4-somes), but you have done a great job of showing their relationship and feelings. I look forward to reading more -- especially the scene when Ryou finally dances again!
person **Lautjuh**
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is one hack of a story you have here!
I totally love it. I hope you update soon^_^
person Rei Ocean
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO UP-DATE!!!!!!!!!! I WANT TO SEE MORE YAOI!!!!!!! WHEN DO RYOU AND BAKURA DO IT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! WHEN!!!!!!! AND WHAT ABOUT MORE MARIK AND MALIK??!?!?!?!!?!!? PLEASE UP-DATE!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when r u going to update
person Meep
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IS IT OVER?! WHERE'S THE NEXT UPDATE?!
person shy and leighc
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that's a fine how do ya do....*glares at computer* It will die! Anyway, just in case it didn't make it through (and besides I forgot to grab our cream puffs...as shy would say "blast my hairy bumble hide..")

We will be seeing more soon yes? After causing shy to stay up past her bedtime to finish all the chapters I will forgive you on the counts that it's A). not a work night and B). I was drooling too *wink* Do take you time hun but hurry *cackles before pulling shy into the fore front* Go on luv.

*shyly bites lower lip while blushing a thousand shades of crimson and shyly trying to hide* I...ever...ever so many shy sorries if...if this is a repeat of our last review. I...um....pretty shyly please more but...only when you can pretty shyly please? And...oodles of shy thanks yous for the puffs and the story. *curtsies shyly before toddling off to bed*

Yeah, what she said. *rolls eyes* Mother of God do I need sleep.
person shy and leighc
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohmygod *tries to hold back the laughter and fails miserably* Very nice work girl. If only shyness didn't have to go to work. Now we have to wait all day *starts muttering curses under her breath while pushing the shy one forward*

*shyly bites lower lip while scuffling a toe in the floor and shyly finding said floor very interesting.....* Um...ever so shy hi's. I...I just wanted to shyly say I can't shyly wait to...to be able to read more after work. *shyly toddles off to finish getting ready*

You made her giggle way too much hun. Go you! *waves before heading after shy*
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person MinuetLove
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy...yummy....more please!!!!
person zehlyah
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better the more you post.
Keep em coming, I can't wait for the next update!