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for One Dance

by ladywolfTerri

person Rei Ocean
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY! finally a new chapter!!!happy happy! Well it was lemon but Seto/Jou not someting I like, but the why Jou is in this I can stand him. well glad theres been an up-date, but please hurry with the Bakura/Ryou! me wants the happy Baku/Ryou-ness! Up-date soon!
person zehlyah
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!!! Seto/Jou goodness! you always surpass yourself and outdo all of my expectations. Can't wait for the next update ;)

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person Lady Laran
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? FANTASTIC UPDATE!!! I'm so glad you're writing again. It really made my day to see this updated. *hugs* Hope you'll update again soon!

Laran and crew
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, didn't see the Seto/Jou thing coming, at least, not this soon. Shows what I know. And he really surprised me when he started calling Seto Mai, that's definitely different. So glad to see and update, like you can't imagine, and the lemon was hot. Hope you update again soon, I want to know if Ryou's gonna have his first with Bakura at the party, like it seemed he was planning. Jeez, hope Jou isn't that mad in the morning, though if I were him, I know I'd probably be damn pissed at least for a little while, he may not even remember that.
person Jess
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG thank you so much!
you have no idea how long i've been waiting for you to update this fic!
awesome chapter!
plz update again ASAP!
luv Jess
p.s pretty please could the next chapter be B/R lemon?
person kenz
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEA! you finally updated!
please dont make me wait another 5 months or whatever it was...
person leighc
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! Shyness....okay fine we BOTH needed this. She was so freak'n happy that you updated she wouldn't sit still. That's a trick and a half...trust me. Hope all's well and don't you be worrying about not updating sooner. Unfortunately life must go on outside of ficdom. Oh, and shy says hi (shyly of course)^_~
person DracOnyx
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! The revision went really well . . . great chapter, habibi.
person Jessica
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH..GOD!...O.O...SO HOT! I love Seto/Joey action!...Albeit, it was borderline rape, but in the end when Joey called out HIS name, I am utterly suspicious he wasn't drunk at all (or am I just stating the obvious?)...anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I am happy you updated! Thanks for coming back! I just loved this story when I first read it and fell in love with the characters and their quirks! I love how they are slowly drawing in Yugi's group into their badass yet overly protective band of 'misfits'! I LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 20! Ja! ^_^....*mmmmmm*...very sated...
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE