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for One Dance

by ladywolfTerri

person SuT
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww.... I mean Awwwwww....

I'm enjoying it, keep it coming...I'm looking forward to some smex!
person kadaj
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice, i love the way that malik acts so cuttteeee.
person DracOnyx
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sugar is a good thing. The weekend looks like it'll be interesting . . . so, are Yugi and Yami going to hook up? That should be interesting . . .
Good job, as usual . . . can't wait to read more.

DracOnyx
person Ralphiere
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One lump or two?

C'mon woman! You need to work faster...I'm impatient y'no? I'm loving it so far, keep it up!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Say huh? How did I miss this little ficcage gem!?! OOh, I know! Probably cuz I'm a self-absorbed idiot who needs to check the YGO pages more often! Great story so far!!
person Ralphiere
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, very sweet. C'mon, more...more...
person DracOnyx
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! Kura kicked Ushio's ass! YAY! Still looks great hun, keep up the good work : )

DracOnyx
person ferocity
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!!!!wonderful of all wonderful's!!!!!this was absolutely the best.Can't wait to see them together helluva a cute quartet, and what pranks will they play? Oh man that laxative prank was awesome, I have to burrow that sometime. *keels over with laughter*

Anyways continue please.

Nuff luv always.
ferocity/firebred
person DracOnyx
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Poor Ryou . . . so glad Bakura actually had a brain to explain to him right. Great job, please continue and update soon.

DracOnyx
person Ralphiere
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...that was sweet...ever so sweet. You hit my warm fuzzies button and now I'm happy!
Nice chapter!