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for One Dance

by ladywolfTerri

person anubiset
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad I came over here to check out the stories. I hadn`t realized that you updated. I`m so happy with this chpater.

It shut up my plot bunnies for a while. They seemed to be drooling though and they left a mess on my computer. Now they have disappeared, not sure if that is good or bad.

This one of the best stories on here. One of them at least. You seem to do good with all the pairings and have my favorite foursome. Malik/Mairk/Ryou/Bakura. I love those four together. Especially in shower scened, not easy to do. But if you can figure out the positions, it works. that was a hint by the way.

Have a plushi of Yugi and Yami.
person Ralphiere
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW...sooo sweet! I love the way this is coming along!

C'mon! When's the party?? *bats eyelashes*, update soon!

Su
person Lady Laran
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome update!!!! Poor Yugi and Yami. I hope it works out well for them.
person Ralphiere
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you leave it there?? You're killing me, I swear to god! This is getting quite interesting and I love the way you're telling it! Please, MORE!
person zehlyah
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this one on ff.net and think its a wonderful story. Can't wait to read the rest of it!!!! Keep up the excellent work!
person anubiset
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was awesome. I can`t even imagine what is coming up next. I haven`t seen this one even though it has obviously been here a while. I love it. So well written. keep going.
person SuT
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can you end it there?? OMG!!

This is coming along so wonderfully, I love it...just update! update! update! (you don't really need a personal life, do you?)

Seriously, great chapter, keep it coming!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was terrific! Marik's flashback was so sweet! Oh, and Malik's parents need their eyes sporked out! *Grrr..they SUCK!*
Is Bakura going to slip infront of Ryou's uncle? Ryou's reaction would be priceless. LOL
Thanks for the great chapter!
person haleygrace
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking god!!!!!!! Malik and marik are so CUTE together!!!!!!!!! Ryou and Bakura are PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person DracOnyx
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! I see you are doing the Yami/Yugi thing, and hope your other 'idea' has sorted itself out for you, hun. As for Honda . . . let Kura kick his ass. He's a homophobe, isn't he? So, is Yami and Yugi going to join Marik/Malik/Kura/Ryou? That would be interesting, I think, but I'm odd like that.
I like how you did Yami's background, and how his reputation is twisted because of former idiots. I know how he feels too . . . sounded almost exactly like my childhood : ( Oh well, enough bad thoughts there . . . I love where you're going with this. Keep it up, and please update soon. Hell . . . I might just ask you if you'll let me archive this on my site : )

DracOnyx

PS - see you on AIM : )