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for Deal with the Devil

by mistryl

person jin1377
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good for nothing lemons are the best!!!! i don't think they always gotta have a reason to fuck each other so i really love this!!!! keep it up!!!! ja ne!
person Elizabeth Spiegel
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so deliciously evil and hot.....I liked it. I'm alittle upset that it's a one-shot, but I can deal with that. Anyway, great work,...more please!
person SerChan
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ser: I believe we already told you how much we love this. ^_^

Yami Ser: If memory serves me correct we did.

Ser: All the same this is a friendly reminder that we love this and that you are a true goddess at what you do! ^_^

~ Ser-Chan ^_^ and Yami Ser v_v
person Reyn
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LoL. I find the idea of Jou getting attached to whoever will take his excess energry rather amusing.
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was good!
I like it how you made the two of them appear dangerous but somehow still under the control of each other. So cool XD
(And, letting Yami keep his card... good thinking. Kaiba got all he deserved, no need to give him an extra bonus)
person Firewing
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since I've read a one-shot that handled these two as effectively as you did in this one. Congrats!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Insert gales of hysterical laughter here) That was a great one-shot! The lemon was very well done, but the part that made me laugh came at the end - first Yami hands off a fake God-Card to Seto, then he gets home...Jou's last line was fucking HILARIOUS! Anyway, thanks for the story!
person yukiko
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn, that's evil ;)
person Sisco
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my much more burned brain!!! *squee* I loved it!!! I appreciate the fact that my brain has become sinders from all the glorious hardcore yaoi I've been reading. You must definitely write more!!! ^o^
person Naye025
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Funny! I loved it!! Jou must be one hell of a lover to wear Kaiba out to the point where he doesn't know real from fake!

Ja!