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for Nazo no Kisu (Mysterious Kiss)

by Naye025

person kawaii_ yugi
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved your story but, no matter how good your hiding place is I will find you...*starts searching for sharp objects*
person Yamima
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait please continue, I love this story
person Yamima
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Yuugi and Atemu are together forever they are just meant to be......RIGHT!
person ecristy85
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL

HOW THE F*CK CAN ATEMU BE SO INSENSITIVE?!?!?!?! PUT EVERYTHING IN THE PAST?!?!?!? BEHIND/!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!? man, i'd kick his f*cking ass if i was a character from an anime put in some crazy fanfics ^^. No, honestly, there's something wrong with the way Atemu is behaving here, I mean, didn't he love Yuugi? he's acting like it's no big deal!!!!

damn, i'm getting more and more mad everytime i get to read a new chapter of your fanfic, you better kick Atemu's ass or else i'll be forced to write and AU of your own fic and make Yuugi part of a band of thugs and kick Atemu's ass.

Anyway i'm kinda the sadomasochist type, so i'll keep on reading your fanfic ^^ keep it going!

slogan: "LET'S KICK ATEMU;S ASS!!! (and Jounouchi's by the way)"
person UsagiLovesDuochan
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* Well since I have not much time nowadays due to stupid learning for exams (I have to make this one because I failed it the first time... ;_; ) you have to bear with me just giving a short whinning to you. So... get them back together!!! *sobs* This is depressing, really... right now I am even wishing you would have stopped writing with them dying in that plane crash... *sniffs* At last they were happy and together were... even though death... *shudders* Oh well, Karim can go to hell, I don't care if he is nice now, Yuugi and Atemu are the only one's supposed to be together. *sighs* Allow Atemu another chance... *pokes author*

*UsagiLovesDuochan /`^_^´\
person UsagiLovesDuochan
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*groans* Noooooooooooo! Why did this happen at all? Stupid Jonouchi, stupid hormones of Atemu... -_- Can't Yuugi just forgive? After all, he had been going out with Anzu while being with Atemu at the same time as well in the beginning. And he also heard Atemu telling Jonouchi that it were his stupid hormones going crazy and all. Their love and relationship just can't die like this. *bangs head against next wall in frustration*

Oh, by the way... a warning... authors note or kind of that would have been really helpful to add at the end of the original story. For days I was wondering what happened with the last parts of the story and if you would put them up again. It was only today when I was thinking about writing you a mail informing you of the missing chapters, that I've noticed you put them into a new extra story. ^^; I was not sure if I should have been happy to have now two more chapters to read or to hit you because I wondered for days what was going on with your story... ^^;

Anyway, right now I feel like killing Atemu and Jonouchi for what happened... *sighs* But I still want to see Atemu and Yuugi coming together again. -_- Please update soon.


*UsagiLovesDuochan /`^_^´\
person ecristy85
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that Jou and Atemu can go both to hell!!! no, seriously, jonouchi it's the lousiest... friend??? EVER E-V-E-R i believe he's as much horrible as those personifications of Tea being a slut to Yugi (which don;t convince taht much either, she's been his frigging friend since kids), and Atemu let's himself being blow-job-ed by his lover's friends in his boyfriend's house?!?!?!?!??! nonononono there's something wrong here, they can't go together EVER AGAIN until Atemu And Jonouchi suffer a lot, and i mean A LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
I think i made my point ^^
AND even after that, jonouchi can't be friends anymore with Yugi, did i say friend? not like he's been much of a friend already

heheehe yeah, since a read that chapter (where Atemu receives the blow-job) it's been bugging me all the time me thinking "how could they?!?!?! sonnuva-!^$@$$%@"
person Heike
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't mind the previous reply. This person obviously doesn't know what they're talking about.

Anyway... I just read it all until now. And I will stop now. Mind you, it's a nice story... at the begning, but now almost 40 chapters (first draft and extended) and not finished by a long shot? No thanks. One hour was enough to discover it, love it, and get tired of it.
Your other stories are nice too.

Ok, i'm out of here, and I wish you better replies than that fool gave you *rolls eyes* I bet they had a bad day.
*smiles and wink*
person chiptruth
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are uterly ignorant.

what about the peopel who have not seen this anime or manga like me? now whenever i see it as SOON as i see those names i will know how it ends. in you greed to steal someoneelses thunder youhave ruined an ENTIRE ANIME for ANYONE who has not seen it. you know what happened to napster right asshole? if you are tiugh enough to write adult fan fiction you are toug henough to receieve an adult lecture.

what happened t napster and mp3s (nmot legal) will happen to fan fic andotaku if peopel like YOU ruin intelligent cartoons that others havenot seen.

your details are irresponsible ignorant inconisderate and insincer and uttely indifferent to anyone who has not seen the annime. i am sure the author intended for the ending tobe a suproise. FUCK YOU you are an GODAMN DOLT and i LOATHE your sort of arrogance.
ALL THIS FOR GAY LOVE WITH DEMONS? this site needs help.
chiptruth
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was quite unexpected and very tragic. But thanks for all the hard work!