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person Shinshin
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit! Do you realise you've made old Shinigami cry?! I don't know how, but I was crying!!! Ahhhhhh, shiiiiit! But the story's cool, gimme more! And DON'T hurt poor Tomb Robber even more, or I'll have Malik on sugar high running amok after you! :)
person AngelKawaii
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Come on you gotta continue! I love how he thinks he's tainted his hikari! Its soo cool please continue! Ja ne!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter is even better than the first! You certainly have a magical way with words.
Very nice!
person aspiker
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this was great. I especially love your descriptions of the conficting feelings of Bakura with being both visited by an angel and yet being damned by the same.
person jadedsoul
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really amusing. I hope you update soon.
person LadyGrey
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again. This is a really great beginning to what I know will be another great story. I'm really happy you're writing again, and as always I look forward to another chapter of anything you've got -- I'm off to your author's page to find out how I missed that other story you mentioned, and find your web page. Oh, and I'm supposed to tell you Lanie really likes this story too. I'm beginning to think she was related to 'Kura at some point... ah well. Ja ne!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is interesting. Bakura sounds like he's utterly insane - no surprise there - but he thinks he's insane for falling in love! Gotta love it. I especially like the bit with the mugger (because I'm warped) and the bit just when Bakura gets home and most of all the very last line - mental image is priceless.
Thanks for the chapter and the notice!
person AngelKawaii
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uuuu! I love it! I can give you somewhere else to post it up and get yet more support! Mediaminer.org It's great really. Well I'll be waiting for the update Ja ne!
person kschur32
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like this a lot. I love the idea of a story from Bakura's point of view. Great chapter.
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, you're cruel! Go ahead, say this is a one shot and just stop when it gets good....*grrrrrrr, hissss, snarl*
Seriously, you have to continue this.......at least one more chapter. I know Ryou's reaction would be priceless! *snicker*