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by Rochelle

person Kari-chan
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!!!! finish!!! Drinking games are soo fun! Especially yaoi themed ones~!!!!! Good work...did you come up with that card game yourself? @.@ I couldnt do that if my life depened on it. x.x; Sounds fun though...I may try the game one day with my friends.^^
person Black Dragon Lady
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude!! this is one of the koolest stories i've read and i might use that game of urs. well keep it up so i can find out more. YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHh!!!!!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great game! Love your fic, it's well written, and has so much evil potential. Yami seems to be loosening up too, is he going to keep doing that and eventually end up on good (or as good as it gets) terms with Bakura? Also, I'd try to add who's talking when you have quotes, it got a little confusing as to who said what in the last chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter, please update it soon!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honda is going to be SO drunk by the end of the night. This should prove interesting...please continue.
person anbuiset
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this one so much. Can`t wait for you to do more. In fact, if you could let me know when you add a new chapter. It would be greatly appreciated. This game sounds like so much fun, too bad my youngest won`t spend the night with grandma.
person Foko
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, that was funny! ^^ i really liked it i hope u continue, can't wait to see wut else happens in the fic!
person chelsey
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!
you have my favorite couples !! but i absolutltey (not spelt right (slaps self on 4head STUPID STAMP!!) love jou and seto!!
GO JOU i hate ANZU!!! anyways i dont care much for sernity and mokuba (no offense) i just cant pictuer sweet little mokie with anyone. (pinches mokuba's cheeks!)
thanks for the drikin game gota try that with my friends!!
Love ya
BWAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
beer
BWAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vodka
BWAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vash
BWAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: hehe hey yami does have a point half the history teacher dont know jack shit bout history but on a more important note hehe im starting to like this one alot hehe it reminds me of the story In 12 Hours and in 48 hours great stories and this one is just a great as those two the only other addes bonus is that theres no tea and mai in interupt with there bullshit hehe and speaking of anzu/tea come on jou thats got to be the most obvious confession on the face of this earth surely you can do better then that and as for the other one another obvious choice hehe its too bad they dont like womenfolk there hehe i maybe a woman but im no wuss i take as much as they can throw heheh it pays to be a tomboy sometimes hehe well keep up the great work and update soon JA NE ^_____~
person Lee
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am ever so slightly worried about what's going to come out during this game. I think I should continue reading just to be sure my suspicions are correct. :P
person michysk
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey....nice story....
wheres the rest?!?!
ya i kneo im impatient :p
ne ways cant wait to read the rest.....