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by Yamima

person Gaia
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anon is you who should go away...be rude like that to Yamimi...Don't listen to him Yamimi!!! Yes it's true that you have a few mistakes on your writing(NOT A FLAME YAMIMI) but is the way to learn and improve (for seeing the errors and correct them) and you are doing right like you did on "Get Away". And you have interesting ideas. Oh and the chapters are a little short. Please keep writing and update soon your stories. Ja ne.
person Joy
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is some people who like to be rude...but lets forget abut Anon...The fic is funny and interesting one. Please I really want to know what happen next so update soon. Bye.
person Yana
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha don't look
person Manah
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea forget people like this and continue with your good work!
person Yamima
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what anon?
There's a difference between critiques and being rude, why don't you grow up,
anyone else, I like to know what you like about the story it'self, no body is perfect anyway,
I can deal with it, why can't anon?
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can't spell, grammar sucks. go away
person Yana
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait
person Yana
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwww poor them
person Yana
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait
person kotori-chan
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I tought it was a new update! *sobs*

PLEASE UPDATE! This fic is so cute!