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by Yamima

person mivu
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was a nice story. cute and simple with a small sprinkle of innocence and kinkiness. cept you have to get the yami's and hikari's in order rite. it'll make people confused if they read it using ur system. no offence kay? love ya story~=D
person Snow Angel
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...What the hell was that? ...And WHY does everyone appear to think Yugi's some sort of slut? He is NOT, dammit.
person Writeress
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Uh, I hate to break it to you, hun. But while anon may be a bit of a jerk, you could use a little cleaning up around here.
person raven_bane
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummmm!!!!!!!! you got bakura and reyo and malik and marick's names worng it's the other way around unless you've got yami's licking yugi and hikaries at the door

(sorry i can't spell worth a flip)
~ja ne
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was KInky....I love it!
person Yana
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww can't wait
person Yamima
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rachi, he is not really a slut, he is from a culture that is allowed more than one lover....who's gonna tell him other wise?........HHHHHHmmmmmmmmm!?...
By the way, it's a good thing to experiment, so do it as often as you like, I do it all the time...The people who read 'Yami's New Game' knows what experiments I concoct..........Damn spelling!
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't to lazy to log in today...Wow that was something new and interesting...Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Yana
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey Yami is Yugi's
they were made for each other
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happen next? Please update soon. Oh and be careful with the grammar and the spelling of the words. Sometimes you forget a letter on a word or the word is iwrong spelling. Not a flame. Is something to help you improve your writing and you are doing a good job. Keep up writing more stories about YamixYugi. Ja ne.