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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exellent opener! That was a really good hook to catch one's attention. Got any more up your sleeves?
When I read this, I couldn't help but wonder if you've read Mercedes Lackey or Anne McCaffrey?
The assault scene was a bit confusing to me but overall, the chapter was very well done.
When I read this, I couldn't help but wonder if you've read Mercedes Lackey or Anne McCaffrey?
The assault scene was a bit confusing to me but overall, the chapter was very well done.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woooh this is really cute!! I hope you continue it soon. I love the descriptiveness.
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good... can't wait for the next update!
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I like. Please continue.
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesomely awesome keep it up!!!!!!! ...please? lol
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
look interesting for a beginnig ..... but put more space in your text, it's easier to read that way