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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Nymphadora_Tonks
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there... ^^ I've been meaning to do this for a while. >< It's just been SO crazy here. I LOVE your story, it's right up there with a nother that I love called "The Viking Brothers." Most stories that I read that have OC in them... I really don't like, but I LOVE your's. There so COOL!!! And Raia reminds me SO much of my son it's not even funny. I wish I would have gotten this done sooner so I could have guessed, cuz I would love have love to be in your story ^^. Please Keep up the good work. I have to get on evey day just to see if you have updated or not lol. >< I love your story so much that I have the first one "Engulfed in Darkness" bound. Kinko's I great LOL. Thank you again for writing this wonderful book ^^.
Love,
Tonks
person jadedkatrina
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JK: alright now that was just plain mean... will Bakura get out of this alive... And will
Ryou return home to be with the other mates and their children... And what about
Joey... what is to become of him... Will he ever wake up.... And why this sudden
Obessession with Ryou by Dartz... there has got to be something underlying in this
matter all together... And what about the other majestics what will come of them...

Anyways gotta go...

Bakura: (still chained to the wall) let me go you demented fangirl...

JK: (stares at him hungrily) how about ...NO

anyways... here's a plug there is a Bishies RPG group the site is http://groups.yahoo.com/group/bishie_rpg
check it out and join... it's lots of fun and we desperately need a Yami character to start running around...

update soon

Ja Ne

Jadedkatrina
person Camille
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me here. First a demon and now Dartz? oy! Poor Ryo! We love to torture him so though. ;) I hope you don't kill Bakura off.
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Bakura can't die!!! Will everything be allright? I hope that Dartz loses...BAKURA GO!!! What happen next? Please update soon. You rock as a writer. Ja ne.
person Juuni
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great...But what happen? Will Bakura be alive? I hope so. Will Joey wake up? Will be the others ok? Ryou and the babies will be ok? Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Gaia
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW..THAT WAS GREAT! YOU ARE A EXCELENT WRITER! What happen next? I hope everything be allright to the vampires and their mates. Please Update as soon as you can. Ja ne.
person Patusca
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry only now I find some time to review your story. Here it go: Great Story!!! You rock as a writer. What happen to Bakura? And the others? Will Jou wake up? Please update as soon as you can. Bye.
person Yaoi Lover
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great!!! I want to know what happen next...Please update soon. Ja.
person Yaoi Fan
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!!! One of the best I red! So What happen to Bakura? And the others? Please update soon. JA ne.
person Horizont
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!

Another well done part! Dartz appears to be such a meany!
The episodes with him just started a few days ago here in Germany so I don't know much about him except for the very few japanese episodes I saw. ^^;;

Please update soon! ^_^x
~Horizont

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