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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Elys
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm sooooooo stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i should have known! oh well..........(starts pulling hair) DARTZ MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *thinks of all the horable things she could do to dartz, laughs evily* Muwhahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (starts to run in cricls) gahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! i'm soooo worried about ryou and bakura....*crys* poor bakura and ryou ... evil dartz..grrrr.................can't wait for the rest...
person Shinigami24
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grabs Wufei's katana and chases Ravenx* You just lost Bakura's protection when you let Dartz kill him!
person Mina
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's cute. Are you going to kill Bakura? *sniffle* Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon. I love this story.
person Seir
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Ba-ku-ra.... *starts hitting Dartz with her textbookfilled backpack* YOU ARE SO DEAD YOU EVIL PERSON!!! YOU CAN'T KILL BAKURA *hits him more*
person Ankh
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Story! I want to know what happens next to the vampires and their mates. So PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person Lady Shinigami
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN, I'm a GENIUS!! I don't even care that I didn't win because I was RIGHT for once in my life!! I was right about Dartz and I was right about him having Mokuba and Saiai too!! I figured it out ALL BY MYSELF!! It's like being told you won the LOTTERY!! *does Happy Dance and sings* I guessed it riiiight, I guessed it riiiight . . .

Hm, I was just thinking . . . Bakura's in a heap of trouble, right? So somebody has to save him and I have my doubts about the other Majestics getting there in time, though not through lack of trying. I wonder if Ryou--possible, but not likely, since he's a human--or the twins will display some sort of heretofore unknown power to rescue him!!

Eh . . . Sounds a bit farfetched even to me, but, well, it could happen!!

*sings and Happy Dances away* I got it riiiight, I got it riiiight . . .


~LS
person Ree
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM

wench *glares*

You better update soon or else

*glares while filing nails, and several pointy objects to extremely sharp points*
person Joy
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is a great Story! What happen next? I hope that everything will be alright. Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Elfen
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the first story and now I love this story. You rock as a writer. What happen to bakura and with the others? Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Aiden
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.

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