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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter - love the riddle game, and the fact that they got Saiai and Mokuba back. I just want to know one thing...
WHAT HAPPENED TO BAKURA AND RYOU!?!?! You left us at a cliffy and still haven't resolved it! *Pouts*

Anyway, please update soon!
person Camille
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!! Not a cliffy! I am glad they are all right, but what about Bakura? Poor Bakura! He's still waiting! ;)
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jou is Awake!!!! YAY! But what happen to Bakura? Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Saiai and Mokuba are back! Ryou, Bakura, and the twins better be okie dokie. I'm glad you like the character bio ^^;. Please update soon! I'll e-mail you back later, okie dokie? Keep up the fantasic job! *Hugs*
person jadedkatrina
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Joey finally woke up...Yeah!!!... anyways now that
that's out of my system...There was no Ryou, Bakura,
or Dartz action in this chapter... Not that I'm complaining
but I do want to find out what happened with Duke... Will
he return to the mansion a little worse for wear, but fine
all the same or is he in deep crud... And what about Bakura
will he be able to defeat Dartz or will he accomplish his insane
plot to bring back the sun.

Any ways update soon and I won't have to torture Bakura anymore...

Plus I don't feel like being on the business end of Ryou's temper...

Jadedkatrina

Ja Ne
person Kit
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAT HAPPEN TO BUKAURE!!!..I NEED TO KNOW!!!.grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...not fair!!!!......JOEY IS AWAKE AND EVERYONE IS FINE!!...wat about Druke?...w.at happen to him?..*sigh*..well...undate soon!
person Sushi
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a good chapter. Great riddles. LOL.

I'm so glad that Joey is ok. Can't wait to find out about Ryou and Bakura.
person Juuni
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great...I glad that they save Mokuba and Saiai(?)...but what happen to Bakura? What happen next? Update soon or I kill you *holding a sword* PLEASE UPDATE!!! Ja.
person Gaia
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! What happen next? And jou is awake! ^_________^ Please update PLEASE!!! *puppy eyes* Ja ne.
person Deathbalce
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D:D:D:D:D
I love ridles @_@
jejejej

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