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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person JoLo
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have thought of more to add to what I said earlier.

I LOVE IT. I wish I could write like you do, but none the less, if you allow me the great privalage, I would love to be a proofreader for your masterpieces. So what do you say? Will you allow it?
person Demon Darkness
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im glad you're are writing a sequel, your first story was great and you have a good writing style, keep up the good work. ^^
person Cursed Paradise
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good. I usually dun lik BakuraxRyou, but you write it so good, that I hafta love it! ^^ Well, I still don't LOVE the pairing, but since I'm hooked to the story, I guess I will have to just learn to live with the pairing, wont I? *giggles* This is a really good story, so keep going. ^^ Though, you know.... Why don't they ever have girls? You know, you should have one of them just have a girl, wonder what that would lead to? *shrugs* Ono, I'll be waiting for the next chappie!
person Gaia
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was great. What happen next? Please update PLEASE!!! *puppy eyes* bye.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I see someone found the fertility drugs :) Looks like the vampire royal family is growing in leaps and bounds. Poor Joey - Seto's so overprotective, and Ryou's downright bitchy when he's knocked up. :) Thanks for letting me know!
person Patusca
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I happy all of them especially with Jou and Seto ^____________^ . What happen next? Is not something bad, isn't it? Please update soon *puppy eyes* PLEEEEEEEEEASE!!! *big puppy eyes*
Ja ne.
person jadedkatrina
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning... I can't wait to see what will happen and who the bad guy
will be this time... and I love what you did with Ryou... he seems the type
that would end up with the only twins in vamp history...

Anyways update soon

Ja Ne

Jadedkatrina
person Sera
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! BABIES~! ^_^;;; they need a nanny... All those youngsters... How on earth will they manage? And all boys too!!! LOL!!!
person Sushi
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so excited for this story. =D I can't wait until y ou post more.
person Mina
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! i love it. This kept my attention, good job. can't wait for the next chapter.