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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person cookie dough
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha, mariks in trouble....hehe! poor yugi and malik, there pregnantless
person Duminas
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good~
I've read all of EID; couldn't stop, either. Aside from some... somewhat minor contractual (as in they're VS their) and spelling errors, both of these are a great read. Can't wait for more.

To put some actual CONTENT in this: You're a great author. Keep up the good work and imaginative writing. :)
person Deathbalce
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! I love what you did to Ryou XD
This will alwais be my favorite story :P
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! Raia and Akira sound so cyute! *Glomps them* Update really soon please! *Glomp*
person Seir
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read the other book and the completed version is great. Good job for this fic too, I just don't know the plot to this story yet *rereads to try and find the plot*
person Eye of Ra
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great start! heh. kura and ryou are one of my fave... and your story is really good. and very well written. ^____________^ can't wait to see what you have next!
person Natz
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Minna no Natz is Back!!!!!!! I am sooooo in love with you. I never want to read any other fanfic other than these ever again!!!! ::pretends she isn't saving a heap of Weiss Kreuz fanfic's at this very moment:: Can you believe my sis took pics of me drooling while I slept and posted them on the web for revenge. That's low, even for her. But the weirdest thing is that five guys have now asked me out. Creepy. Newayz KEEP WRITING. Don't Stop, Don't Stop The Beat....Can't Stop, Can't Stop The Beat!!! Send me your address so I can send you a ton of weird stuff from Down Under. You won't believe what we Aussies come up with!!! Oh and email me when you post so I can read it ASAP!!!!!!!!

Love the little kitty who likes to eat gumdrops,

Natz *^.^*

P.S: This is my constipated smiley ........ *>.<*
person Elys
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.......................................must............read..........more......................... PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved the frist story............and so far........... i love this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't waight for the next one!!!!!!!!!!! (i know..........can't spell -_-) so yeah...........more.......soon.............need.......very good story. love it!
person Lady Shinigami
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers at top of lungs* Oh yeah! It's here! OH YEAH!! IT'S HERE!!

LOOK, Ryou's preggers with TWINS!!! And Yami and Yugi have a new baby too!! And Jou's finally pregnant!! SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!! I wonder what sort of adventures they'll get into this time . . .

By the way, enjoy your PS2--I know my dad and I have had fun with ours the past year!!


~LS
person Jess
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg! i love this story sooooooooooooooooo much! ur a fantastic writer!
please update this asap!
love Jess!