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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Juuni
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great End! You are a excelent writer. Please post soon the sequel. Ja ne
person Elys
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DO YOU KNOW HOW SCARD YOU HAD ME!!!!??????? when bakura was tied to that slab... and the stakes shoot up thourgh Bakura's wrists.... i was all most crying.... and would have been had he not gotten up and kicked dartz' ass!!!! heehee i LOVED! your story! it was great! i can't wait to read the next one!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, looks like Dartz underestimated Bakura...good thing too. And everyone's healthy and happy. But I wonder...what effects will there be from Bakura drinking the blood of a sorcerer?

Looking forward to part 3!
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww Engulfed in Brightness ish done now? *Pouts* Oh well, one more to go XD. You should add more Yami/Yuugi XD. I love that pairing XD. I'm glad Ryou and Bakura made it back safe. And that's twice that Bakura killed off a bad guy XD. Awwwwwwwwww... *Melts* Brennan and Athan are so cyute *melts even more* Actually all of their kiddlings are so cyute ^-^. Well, keep up the wonderful work! Hope to see you soon! Ja'ne!
person Horizont
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How did you do that? You just managed to have me, who hates mpreg, read a story including a sequel that is mainly about mpreg! *shakes her head in amazement* neway, great job, I'm looking forward to whatever sequel you plan. ^^x

~Horizont
person Sushi
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this part is over. But I certainly can't wait for the next part. I really do love this story. =D
person darknessmiko
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!! All done! What's the next sequal gonna be about?
person jadedkatrina
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there excellent chappie and ending... I can't wait for the next and final(?) story to be published...
when are you going to start the side stories to this trilogy... will it be after the next story... Well anyways
update soon, cause I wanna find out if Ryou will have any more kids or is Joey never going to have them,
and what about Yugi... will he appear knocked up...

anyways can't wait...

Jadedkatrina

person anubiset
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn`t get back here sooner. I was so caught up in my new pasttime. I found some good stuff on another site. Anyway. I love this and can`t wait to see what else you do. This was fabulous. You are a great writer. Keep it up.
person Eye of Ra
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aawwwwwwww!!! yay for Kura and Ryou!! *grins all happily*

but i still say ill stick with Naraku... ^________^


cant wait to see what the sequel will lead to. ^_^

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