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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Sheri & Dei
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My friend and I TOTALLY LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!! We both hope that Joey and Brayden will be alright. Great stories, keep posting them and, trust me, we’ll keep reading them!! BTW,please put us on your mailing list for updates,thanks, and thanks again for these wonderful stories. Ja, Sheri & Dei
person Camille
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Put me on your list. I hope the baby comes out okay. What are the Chosen Ones??? I hope Bakura does not have to die for this...
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...great....Is joey be ok? And that strange dream... please update soon. Ja ne.
person Natz
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo minna!!!! Natz is in da House!!!! Let mme see you say OoOoOoOo.....I Like Pocky!!!!!

Alright letz get to the point. Story......mind blowing. Author.......absolute legend!!!! Natz........totally stoked.

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Mate all that smiling hurtz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Home address will do. It'll prob be a letter first but as soon as I get enough money for postage (or pott - either's good) I'll send something relaly koolie.....okie dokiez?

Love the minna who snuck into a U2 concert,

Natz
person Sera
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like a plot is developing here. Sounds good. Keep it up.
person Juuni
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good...What happen to jou and the baby? They ok? Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Terri
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie!! Seto go nighty-night!! *LOL* Poor Jou though! I hope everything is going to be okay! Well just wanted to review and say great job!! Can't wait for the update!
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww *Pouts* Why'd you have to leave it off there? It was getting good too XD. I hope Jou and Seto's baby is gonna be ok. Please update soon and keep up the fantastic job! Also, if it isn't too much trouble, can I be added to your mailing list for updates? Thanks ^-^.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geeze, some people just don't think. Getting out of the way so the healer can help is a good thing when there's a problem. I sure hope nothing happens to Brayden.
Thanks for the early update, and Happy New Year!
person Kit
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Story is great!!..Ryou is going to be a fatehr!.....and Bakura!!...how cute!!..i jsut like ur stories, keeps wrting then and i will keep reading them!!....mahaha!!....i lvoe then....well..i will eb waitng till u put up the next one!..thank you!