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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Duminas
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL cliffy! I sure hope Jou's going to be alright... somehow. Good to see Brayden born okay, at the least.
Enthralling, to say the least~
person take-chan!
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O what a cliffy!!!!!
person jadedkatrina
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE...SOON...I want to find out what happened to Joey and
will he be okay... plus you still need to tell me why Ryou's twins
behaved the way they did when Joey went into labor...Was it a
warning sign that something was wrong with Joey or was it
something else...

Anyways enjoying the story greatly and can't wait until the next
update...

Ja Ne

Jadedkatrina

Update soon
person take-chan
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You would email us when its been updated? wow thats dedication! add me to the list for sure, your story rocks
rdaniels@ucalgary.ca
person Sera
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaah! I wanna know what happened!!!! Jou better be alive and well!!!! T_T Hurry and continue this, you evil cliffhanger-making person!!!!!
person giffen870
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you left it like that! GRRR! oh well good story! update fast :D
person Jadejj
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What have you done with the pup? Don't make the dragon mad to kill all. His brother missing and now this? Poor Seto.
person Deathbalce
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OWWWWWWWWW!
poor Seto O__O
THATS WHAT HE TAKES FOR BEING SO STUBORN JEJEJEJ:p
person Elys
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god..........is every thing going to be alright?????????????........ (is worried) oh..................i must know what happens next............and let me guess......the guy from Ryou's dream (more than likely) has a part of this early brith thing with joey right? and also let me guess.......he isn't the good guy that he's trying to make himself out to be right? .............(sigh) u must up date soon.......please???????? (puppy dog eyes)
person Gaia
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Strange dream that Ryou had. Is Jou ok? And the baby? What happen next? Please update! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!! *puppy eyes* Ja ne.