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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Camille
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! You had better come out with the next part tomorrow!!! I want to know what happens next!!!!! I want to know if Joey is ok. I waited and waited and then...CLIFFHANGER!!!! I really like this! :)
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff* *sniff* Why did you have to stop THERE?! *Clings to your leg* Why?! *Pouts* No fair... XD. Well, update soon please and hopefully, nothing too bad happened to Jou ^-^.
person Elys
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVILNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! clifys are so mean............... you must update soon....or i think i could very well die... (everyone cheers in background) love it so far... looking forward to more, and keep writing all of yout great storys!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Elys
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, and what half did i get right?.......and........ please don't tell me joeys dead................. he just....... he just can't be..... he may not be one of my fav chariters, but still, i like him........so yeah...... update soon.........k?
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happen to Jou? Please update to let me know! *puppy eyes* PLEEEEEEEEEASE! Keep up the great work. Ja ne.
person kit
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!...sorry i could not review on the last one...i tried but i was having compter progems.......sorry!!...i really wanted to read ur stories i love them!...i can't wait till u put up the next one!.....want happen to Joey!!!????....*sniff*...I HAVE TO READ THE NEXT ONE!!!!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahem. First of all, I would like to say that your skills as a writer are damned impressive, and that the characterization of the kids is very real.
Now...AAHHHHHH!!!! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH JOEY!!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!
Please update soon! *puppy dog eyes*
person Juuni
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happen? *worried* What happen? Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Sushi
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you're so evil! I hope you update soon. I want to know what's going on with Joey!
person Gaia
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Jou ok? What happen? Please Update! Bye.