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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person anubiset
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished this one and the first. This is so damn interesting that I couldn`t stop and then I came to chapter three and there was no more. How is Joey, please update soon.
person Lady Shinigami
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*frowns* Why did I suddenly get a horrible sense of impending doom when Saiai said he wanted a baby RIGHT before going on a hunt for allies who could be in REALLY deep trouble?

As for Joey, well . . . it's one of two things. Either it's all a ruse and he's just fine and Mikado and Zemti are playing a terrible, mean joke on everyone or there were some complications and Joey's not dead, but he's on the edge of it/very weak because of the strain the labor caused.


~LS
person Natz - Whatta ya Lookin\' @ Punk? HuH?! HuH?! Mmmm....Pepperoni!!!!
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo Yo Yo Whattup Bro? I'm here again to inform you that your the most amazing, takented and insoired writer of our times. Yes it's true. No I'm not bullshitting as per normal!!!! ::coughs.....ahem......you didn't hear that last part:: >.< I think seeing as I give you such good, interesting, uplifting and totally wacky reviews, you should dedicate this story to me......YOUR AUSTRALIAN COMPADRE IN CRIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :: coughs....can you tell I'm part Italian, part La Famiglia Nostra?:: Newayz I love it and am totally waiting for the next chapter.

Love Natz.
That's Right, Natz.
Not Gwen Stefani Wannabe.
Natz

P.S: I think that Malik should MIRACULOUSLY have a little girl vampire named Natz too.
person Seir
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O ...
*begins bashing head into a wall* The suspense is killing me!!!
*bashes head more* Please update soon, the story is too good to take forever.... well, if forever is within a month, then it's ok
person Terri
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! Evil cliffie!!! EVIL!!! Great chapter BTW..and please say Joey is okay!!! Well hoping the next update comes soon!!
person Shinigami24
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*DEATH GLARE* Joey better not be harmed in any way-physical, mentally, emotionally and spiritually! Or there'll be a very dead author! *taps feet* How many chapters does this ficcy have?
person koalared
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please update soon! I must know what happens to Joey.
He better not be dead!
person Horizont
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do know that is a cliff hanger, right? *glares at ravenx*

So you "hated" chemistry? At least you can talk about it in the past...

oh well, so Drake and Saiai are going to have a little one of there own? Cute. ^^x really, this is starting to become the ultimate Yu-Gi-Oh!-children-soap. :P

Ciao!
~Horizont
person Cursed Paradise
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, so so so evil!! That's not fair..... I want Chapter Four. *whines* I'll be checking my mail evey day ^^
person Jess
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg!
u r evil!
u can not do that!
i have to know what happens to joey!
please don't let him die!
please update ASAP!
love Jess