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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Elys
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm going INSANE!!!!!!!!........... oh wait..... i all ready am..... heehee.... so yeah... that guy that talks to Ryou is the new bad guy.... i think...no..sure of it... any ways........oh i just want to kill him!!!!!!...and he hasn't even really came into the story..... i feel so bad for joey and seto and drak....*crys* i hope joey gets better soon...so...UPDATE SOON! (PUPPYDOG EYES!!!!!) please???????? love your story! can't wait for the rest!
person Gaia
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will Jou wake up? And about Ryou's dreams, who is the mysterious guy from it? What happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Juuni
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jou...*sniff* What happen next? Please update. Bye.
person Patusca
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jou have to wake up! I need to know what happens next so please update as soon as you can.
person Cursed Paradise
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, you better make Joey wake up, or I'll do something!!! The something will be something that will scare you!! Okay, ignoring that really bad lame threat.... Hurry up and post more chapters, can't wait for more... You got me addicted, oh you are a evil person, just evil!!
person jadedkatrina
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter like always... Now who is this mysterious voice
who keeps contacting Ryou... and why did he/they/it choose him
over the other mates... Does it have something to do with the
twins or is it someone who is obsessed with the White haired
Angel...

Anyways can't wait to see what will happen with Mokuba, Joey,
Ryou, the twins and everyone else...

And tell the Bakayaru Bakura to stay away from the computer
or else I'll steal his ring away and bury it so deep beneath the
Everglades He'll never find it...

gotta go

Ja Ne

Jadedkatrina
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jou is in coma! I hope that he wakes up...Ryou had the starnge dream with the mysterious person...what happen next? Please update soon. ja ne.
person Ree
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glares at ravenx for torturing poor ryou and seto*
do you hate the 2 of them or something? Or why else can't you just let them have a happy life?

meh, srry, not really mad at you, but . . . *shrugs*

srry i havent reviwed much lately, been busy, anywhoos, happy holidays . . .
person Jadejj
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just getting so sad Mokuba missing Jou in a conma and Ryou having someone haunt him in his dreams...
person Deathbalce
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a strange dream @_@ ans poor Joey:(
I just love your stories :P