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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person giffen870
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story. update soon. I can't believe you won't just post them all lol. You should you greedy review wanting fiend. It will never work! what do you mean it's working? lol i kidd i kidd. hurry up with that chapter and kill off joey and I kill off you. nah not really just kill off puppy and I hurt someone. or will i? oh never mind. to summarize this review great story post more don't kill off joey or the pillsbury doughboy gets it. that work?
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Joey is in a comma" <-- I'm sorry. I know it was a typo, but I couldn't help myself. I laughed. U_U . . . . . . XD

*sniffles* Everybody's so sad . . . Bad things are going to happen, I can SENSE it!! By the way, when Joey wakes up--there is no IF about that, understand?--WHEN Joey wakes up, the sap of relief must equal the wind-up angst, okay? Okay.

^_~


~LS
person Lady Shinigami
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK!! Sorry--the above is from me. You can ignore it. THIS is the review I meant to give.

"Joey is in a comma" <-- I'm sorry. I know it was a typo, but I couldn't help myself. I laughed. U_U . . . . . . XD

*sniffles* Everybody's so sad . . . Bad things are going to happen, I can SENSE it!! By the way, when Joey wakes up--there is no IF about that, understand?--WHEN Joey wakes up, the sap of relief must equal the wind-up angst, okay? Okay.

^_~


~LS
person Lady Shinigami
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Double ACK!! What's wrong with this thing?! Post, damn you! POST!! Let's try this again . . .

"Joey is in a comma" --- I'm sorry. I know it was a typo, but I couldn't help myself. I laughed. U_U . . . . . . XD

*sniffles* Everybody's so sad . . . Bad things are going to happen, I can SENSE it!! By the way, when Joey wakes up--there is no IF about that, understand?--WHEN Joey wakes up, the sap of relief must equal the wind-up angst, okay? Okay.

^_~


~LS
person Patusca
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jou...He have to wake up!!! What happen to Mokuba? I really want to know what happens next...Please update soon.
person Eye of Ra
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww... poor kura... poor joey! ...and seto and drake... and poor, poor ryou.... im still all like.. "what DID happen to mokie?? ..." lol. guess ill just have to wait and see, right? lol... yeh.... and i have to wait till my birthday to get a new update i bet. feh. *shrugs* oh well? .. << good story. ^__^
person kit
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!! its so so so so so cool!!....*sniff*...poor Joey....i do hope he is okay and will wake up soon...and who is the guy who is talking to Ryou?......i can't stop thinking of it!....its so cool!!>..grrr...I HAVE TO READ THE NEXT ONE!!!...i cna't wait till u put up the next one!!....plez plez plez put it up!!..its so so cool!!!.....
person cookie dough
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww! poor joey....h-how could this happen....he has to wake up soon! And ryou needs to stay far far away from that voice, it's evil, very very evil....
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! But... Why did you put Jou in a coma? *Sniff* *sniff*. Baby Brayden sounds so cyute! Update soon please!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Owch. Poor Joey, and Seto and Drake. That is harsh, but at least Joey's alive. And what is with the dream? I get the feeling that the voice is both lying and telling the truth, if you catch my meaning. Well, I'm sure we'll figure out what's happening enventually.