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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! *Glomp* You added more Yami/Yuugi! I love that pairing. Lol. Erm... About that mystery voice person... Hmm... I'm thinking Dartz. XD. Don't ask, that was the first name that popped up in my head XD. Great chapter and update soon please!
person Ree
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The person in Ryo's dreams wouldn't happen to be Pegasus, now would it?
person take-chan
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm who is the mystery voice...*thinks hard*...........*harder*.........ok i dont really have any idea. I want to say pegasus, but that sure isnt right. Sooo lets say Shadi. Love the story!
person Kit
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!....so so great!!.......if i would to guess who the peson would be....hm....i would guess.....that guy...i don't remember his anme but he is in the new YU-GI-OH show,,with the dragons annd all....arrr!!!...if only i sould remember his name...but he is the main guy and is atfer Yami and Yugi!!...atfer the dragons....i don;t remember his name!!......grrr...sorry...but i guess that and i love ur story it is gatting so so so good!!..i love it!!...
person Deathbalce
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jajajajaj, I have no aidia who it is nor can I think of someone jajajajaja :P
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was going to say Pegasus, but that's too easy; and suddenly it popped into my head.
Therefore, my guess is Dartz (or however you spell it) from the Doom arc.

Now for the rest of the review. I think that this story is just getting better as it goes. I love the character dynamics you've set up.
person Camille
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story again! Poor Bakura! I don't think he's looking forward to having his kids. Of course, they will turn out like him! I still see Ryo banging the three of them on the head with a frying pan. He thought he was only having two children...he winds up with three...

The mysterious voice is...Zork?
person Sushi
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. Actually 2 since I was gone for the last one. =D I can't wait for more.

Hmm... the voice in Ryou's dream. I'd say maybe Seth? It's just a random guess. haha
person Lady Shinigami
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lessee . . . e-mail, check. My guess . . .?

Well, I haven't looked at the other reviews--I usually don't--so I have no idea if someone else has already guessed this. However, I'm assuming that since you exploited Pegasus in the last story than this one must be . . . oh, damn, I just had a thought and now I have two to pick from, but . . . Mm . . .

All right, fine. I'm going to make a logical decision, here. Since all this dream stuff seems a bit too sophisticated for a character like Keith (actually, it's more like something Naraku would do, I think . . .) I'm going to guess that it's Dartz.

And I SWEAR--if it IS Keith I will SCREAM.


~LS
person Shinigami24
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grabs pointy objects and heads for Ravenx* I warned you. And now u say Joey might die?! Oh, u're dead, Ravenx!