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for Engulfed in Brightness

by Ravenx

person Giffen870
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't do contests but I'll be all werid and make a guess I know is going to be wrong but Pegaus. there ha! you won't get me on that! Mwhahaha yes... oh damn! I just got involved with this dreadiful contest. *growl* darn I need a roleplay and maybe a drink a man and a ciggy. Oh well... good story, adn my threat of harm still stands if you kill joey. The summary of this one,
I'm female single woman who roleplays smokes and drinks and reads smutty gay fanfiction about one of the best animes on tv i like your story and will hurt you if you make me cry by killing off people.
person darknessmiko
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is he from yugioh? If so uhhh...Darts (or Dartz)??? Lol! XD update soon please!

Darknessmiko
person Jess
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! i just love this story!
it just gets better and better!
oooo i think the voice belongs to pegasus back from the dead!
probably wrong but o well!
plz update ASAP!
love Jess
person Yume no Kareta
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At frist i thought that it was Peguses, but he's dead (and once you're dead, you're most likely not gonna come back). Now i have a different person in mind, and i'm probably wrong on this because its completely OOC for her...but is the voice in Ryou's dreams Tea/Anzu? She's the only main character left from Yu-Gi-Oh that isn't in your fic...>.>;

Thanks, keep up the good work and please update soon!

**Yume no Kareta
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!!! But when Jou wakes up? And when Ryou enters in labor? What happen next? Please update soon.
My guess is Dartz (Is this is name?) Ja ne.
person Juuni
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happen next? I hope Joey wakes up...Well I believe that Dartz is the mysterious man from the dream. Ja ne.
person Natz
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo Im Back.....tanner thatn ever!! Yep got you addy....will send it next week? But who da hell do I adress it to? Ravenx? John?Jane Doe?

Will review better next time.......tpp hungry to think.

Love ya Biatch!!!!
person Horizont
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, let's see...

it gotta be a character from Yu-Gi-Oh!, right? But most of the human characters do already have a role in the story... well except most of the females, but this is yaoi after all so let's ignore them for now. It might be a card... but that wouldn't make sense, would it? Damn it, that's hard! And I'm sooo bad with riddles... not to mention, that it might be a new character from the doom season that hasn't started in Germany yet... That Dartz guy, dunno how to write his name. *thinking* God, I don't have a clue!!! >_
Just update soon! ^_^x
~Horizont
person Yume no Kareta
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! i just went and read through the other reviews and everyone seems to think its some guy named Dartz? i don't know any of the new people from new seasons!! (i dont watch TV anymore..cause everything is re-runs and it pissed me off cause there's no new eps...)
like i said, im wrong about Tea/Anzu...i just know it. for one thing, i forgot that the voice was a guy..and Tea/Anzu is a girl..Kami-sama, how am i so dumb?! >.<

oh well...anyway, i loooove you're fic. please please please update soon!! (or even better, post all the remaining chapters at once!! XD)

could you please add me to your mailing list for updates?
Thankies, and sorry for wasting 2 reviews!

**Yume no Kareta
person Alia Lowe
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. Ryou and Bakura make an awesome couple. You have done a terrific job with the story line in both this and Engulfed in Darkness. So far for your contest, a lot of people have guessed what my first impression of the mystery character, so I am going to go with my second guess: Duke. I know that he is supposidly one of the good guys, but he was eying Ryou at the beginning of Engulfed in Darkness. He is also one of the only characters other than Pegasus who put so much passion into his work. *shrug* That's my guess. Great job so far, I can't wait to see what happens next.