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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well ... it's getting more OC I think. And I hated it when the final of Bakura's and Ryou's (more Bakura's I guess) fight with Dartz was suddenly interrupted with flying flocks and incorrect answered riddels ... even if that ws quiet funny. But I guess that actually was a good move to enhance the tenseness.
At first I thought: a bit too much all and too less Ryou/Bakura but ... okay that didn't change but I loved it anyway. I laughed with this story and got frustrated over it even was in tears shortly.
At first I thought: a bit too much all and too less Ryou/Bakura but ... okay that didn't change but I loved it anyway. I laughed with this story and got frustrated over it even was in tears shortly.
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm at ch 5 where you asked readers to guess who the voice beckoning to Ryou is in his dreams. my guess is the Thief king Bakura. LOL
I'm sure this was done long ago and I jusy wanted to take a guess too. lol
Great fic series!!
I'm sure this was done long ago and I jusy wanted to take a guess too. lol
Great fic series!!
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So enjoyed this sequel. I love it when the guys are preggie. The story is filled with love and good family life. I'm a sucker for such stories. Add to that your original background of fantasy and the occasional mayhem - good stuff - keep the reader on one's toes. Thanks for the great read.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, another happy ending. ^_^ And kawaii twins! Very glad that everyone made it out alright and healthy. And another lovely story, very lovely. Lots of drama, lots of suspense, lots of babies (lol), and a very well written ending to suit it all. Your writing skills are enticing and the stories are addictive, lol. Well, off to read the next story. ^_~
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I liked Ryou better when he was more scared, but I can't wait to read about the twins some more. ^^ Two thumbs up, man! Keep up the good work!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock. That's all there is to it. You rock.
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fine you are offically off the hook, so tell Heero to relax! *shrugs* But, who will be the new villian then? And how many chappies?
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Bakura got Dartz good! I was like no! He will not get Ryo! In your next one, who will be taking Ryo? ;)
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit of a fast endding but it was still good :P I see it was Dartz that was the bad guy good luck with your next fic
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bakura is ok!!!!! YAY!!! Please post soon the sequel. Will Yugi be pregnant in the sequel? I say this because on the first story Malik was pregnant, in this one were Jou and Ryou and now the next story maybe Yugi. You rock as a writer. Ja ne.