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for Bad Omyn

by Yamima

person M3[y
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok dude this was really fuked up!.............But it made me laugh like hell!!
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pregnant men is an old cliche.. BUT A PREGNANT TEEN BOY THAT'S HILARIOUS!
person Inuyasha
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap i just read the chapter wen....wen.....YUGI GIVES BIRTH!!!!AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
person Inuyasha
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O THANK GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some people should be quiet!!! People!!! This is a FAN FICTION SITE SO WE SHOULD BE ABLE TO WRITE WHAT WE WANT TO! IT'S BECAUSE OF BEING A FAN FICTION SITE THEY ALLOW PEOPLE LIKE YUGIANAL WHO IS GROSS. On the review now. It's a funny fic. And you are doing a good job. Some errors on the spelling and in the grammar (NOT A FLAME) and no one is perfect even you Yamimi. But some people should look to the contents of the story and not look only to the errors on the spelling or grammar. And I see interesting, funny, fluff and others things on your stories Yamimi. So KEEP WRITING. Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's also bad if you can't follow the ToS of the site. This is neither adult nor fiction, hell it's not even chat script which is against the rules.
person yugianal
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yures is degrading too
person Yamima
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mine is just hilarious, your just being gross!
person another critic
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's a bit of a bad impression if you spell your title wrong...
person tati
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
funny story lol lol lol lol