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for Dirty Little Secret

by Reyn

person Kerstin
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't tell me you're finished here! I dar you! There is still so much to tell and you just leave this be? Oh please don't do that!
I need to know how you continue this! I really need to.
When was the last update by the way?
I'm begging here. Please continue.
person LynLin
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I REALLY liked that. Hope you update soon!!!!
person Janai
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More? Please?
person Janai
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More? Please?
person ainm49
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know- that seemed like a pretty good yaoi scene to me, especially if that was only the second one you've written! I like your Ryou and Bakura, the scene with the hair dryer was hysterical. I also liked your description of Bakura's reaction when Ryou said his name, nice!
person Fox
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O I think i love you. If i could marry you i would. That was just so amazing. Your wonderful. Please update soon.
person Tinka
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was that seriously your second lemon written? Because.. gods. Talk about hotness *drools* That was increadible. You must write more lemons. lol!
So.. Bakura found out.. *snicker*
Thought: Ryou lost his virginity in a school bathroom.. o.0 is that even hygenic?! lmfao. Yep, who cares!
Why did Bakura leave so soon. Ryou will get cut about that methinks. He'll be all "he used me" and blah blah. Poor diddums.

Enough jabbering from me
I loved it.
Please write more, asap! ^^
person Not Supposed to Be Here XDD
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY. Who says your lemons are ameturish? Maybe those people just like plain, straightforward sex rather than something with feelings and intense emotions. I could just...FEEL what the characters were feeling; the anxiety, the sarcasm, and omg, the YAOI. I LOVE IT. Descriptive. Emotional. Everything. Love it.
person Yamima
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO BRAVO!
person maggiemay
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well it was VERY GOOD SMUT. Now make 'Kura really love Ryou...or better yet...make Ryou show him the difference. I love a Seme Ryou...