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so that is the end of the chapter afterall. sorry, just stopped so abruptly is all. well, i still think you should continue this fic but make the chapters longer, like your first chapter was. i'm not trying to sound mean or anything but this was barely a paragraph. if i didn't think this story had potential i wouldn't have bothered reviewing so don't take anyof this as a flame, please(not my intention). i do hope that you continue.

ja ne

Not a bad start to what always leads to good work. It is strange to see you writing Yu-Gi-Oh! when I am accustomed to seeing your excellent writing under Gundam Wing. I think that as of this point, you have portrayed Ryou and Yami very well. I can't wait to see where you take this plot line from here. There are endless possibilities beyond the obvious cliches that tend to be overused. I look forward to your next chapter.

um, i don't think the whole chapter posted. it ends at your comment about it sounding like Ryou having sex. either that or my computer is fucked up.

Awww! PoOr RyOu! That was a great start! I look forward to the next chapter!

please continue this looks good. i love ryou stories.

ja ne