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for Rites of Passage

by SuT

person HoLvHoT
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG
harpies brother is hot he needs to be in more fanfics
you make it so hot
and dark magician is smexy
overall it is totes awesome
Brava
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow and here I thought Dark Magician was best paired with Celtic Guardian. You took my second favourite Spellcaster, (first is Dark Paladin)and my favourite Harpy and paired them together. I should definitely show this fic to my boyfriend since he plays a Dark Magician deck and a Harpy deck.

Good job and I would love to see more of this pairing!
person sexy pancake
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. it's hard to find "okay" duel monsters fics, you know? lol. when i read in this fic's description that it had harpie's brpther in it, i had to go to the trouble of looking up harpie's brother on google. lol. i couldn't remember what he looked like. anywho, this fic was great and any follow-ups would be just as cool!
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow.....that is HOT!
person Naria
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*brain died*

*click*

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...

*click*click*
PrEttY..
*drooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool*

*VROOOM!!*

Supernatural sexy bishie yaoiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I wish ~I~ was Dark Magician...I mean, torturing such a loverly winged bishie would be SO awesome...and EVIL!! Man, even if I wasn't Dark Magician I'd be kickin' some ass for the opportunity!! ^___^ MUAHAHAHAHA!!! But if I were Harpie's Brother...well...let's just say I wouldn't put up much of a fight!! ^_^

Very cute and funny and GREAT!! Now...if only you could do something with Getsu Fuhma...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
person Deb
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great!
Original too!!!
Excellent ficlet huni!
I love it!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Rebecca (lastofthesane)
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... Yum. ^_^
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That was pretty cool!
person Megan
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your fic. It was short and VERY sweet. Thank you.
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