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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
weird story, kinda fast but it's okay
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SICK! Well just sick, the ening seems rushed though, it was good in it's own sense...
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good One! Yami having a dark side!!! But I don't like to see Yugi hurt like this but was interesting to read it. Keep up the good work. Please post more stories. Ja ne.
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww damm
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha poor Yugi
are they going to get together again
are they going to get together again
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haven't you ever seen a porn? It's the same thing, review anything else I wrote, they are good, except Sex, drugs, rocknroll, I was having a little fun with that story
Seduction of Evil is an awsome story, try reading that one!
Seduction of Evil is an awsome story, try reading that one!
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude. That was retarded. Seriously. It had little to no plot whatsoever, lacked so much detail, and the mistakes in grammar and spelling were atrocious and quite annoying after the third once.... ⌐_⌐
Next time you decide to post something, make sure it's at least WORTH the effort.... y'know... Actually posting MORE than maybe 300 characters an update? That'd be a great start.
If you aren't gunna do anything to improve yourself, quite writing; it'd be doing this site a favor.
Ja. Much love,
Kanki
Next time you decide to post something, make sure it's at least WORTH the effort.... y'know... Actually posting MORE than maybe 300 characters an update? That'd be a great start.
If you aren't gunna do anything to improve yourself, quite writing; it'd be doing this site a favor.
Ja. Much love,
Kanki
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I was writing this while being rushed off the com so my bonehead sis could check her damn E-mail. but trust me, Seduction of Evil is a better story cuz I had time to wright it. As for my spelling same problem, and I had a plot but that bitch sis of mine threw me off my train of thought. It was written like a bad porno I admit it, but read my second story, you'll like it. trust me.
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* er...what was that?
Joey: It was called a fanfic
Cloud Strife: yeah...
Reno: Damn that was the..shit *holds up sign saying learn to write*
Yami: Good Ra...Aibou!
Yugi: *sniffs* I don't know if I should cry what Yami did to me or how this was wrote
You really need to get a plot going it seems you just rushed this. I'm not flaming your skills I'm flaming the plot/
WTF WAS THAT oO
Joey: It was called a fanfic
Cloud Strife: yeah...
Reno: Damn that was the..shit *holds up sign saying learn to write*
Yami: Good Ra...Aibou!
Yugi: *sniffs* I don't know if I should cry what Yami did to me or how this was wrote
You really need to get a plot going it seems you just rushed this. I'm not flaming your skills I'm flaming the plot/
WTF WAS THAT oO
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ummm....eeeep....where was Yami when his light was being hurt...and why didn't Yugi know it wasn't Yami? They know each other's soul. Good idea...just had a few questions