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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait till the next update!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FF.net are idiots! This story is amazing and i'm loving every minute of it! It's kinda disturbing to see Jou and Yami as the mental cases and Bakura as the relatively sane one, but it is certainly a refreshing change! :D I hope you continue to post on here, (and eventually get back on ff.net) and i'll be keeping my fingers crossed that the storm bypasses your area! ^_^
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERy GOOD!
So Im guessign tehy are assasins neh?
thats awsome I love it update
when you can ^.^
So Im guessign tehy are assasins neh?
thats awsome I love it update
when you can ^.^
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, BLOOD! You know what I like, don't ya! That was cool of Jou to slip Marik a blade for hurtin' Ryou. Awesomeness as usual. Keep it coming, babe!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Marik died..*L*..no wonder Bakura doesn't want Ryou near Jou..he is dangerous..but will Ryou stay out of things until they leave or will Yami ask him anyways? Okay..Great chappie and can't wait for the next one!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're doing a great job. The characters are well developed and the story is progressing pretty good too! That all the characters have thier twisted/evil ways is intreging. This chapters ending, with Jou killing and loving his job was especially good. 8-)
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
stunning...as i've come to realize is your usual M.O. keep it up!!!!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Whoo...Joey's a hit man! Coolness!
So Yami's a drug dealer, Joey's a runner and hit man..I can see why Yami would want Ryou to work for him as a runner...no one would think to question him.
Keep going please!
So Yami's a drug dealer, Joey's a runner and hit man..I can see why Yami would want Ryou to work for him as a runner...no one would think to question him.
Keep going please!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... hehehehehe, awesome job! Things just keep getting more and more intersting. Keep this up, you're doin a great job! Can't wait for the next update!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh shit! *rereads the part with joey and marik* damnnn. i wasn't expecting that. i think i like your joey. is that bad thing? anway lovely work. cant wait for the next chapter. i wanna know what yami thinks ryou is so perfect for.