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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi hi me again i really really really love this fic! your such a good writer! hope to see an update soon but if now take your time. ja ne!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just thing to help me feel better when I'm sick. Thanks, and I can't wait to see what's coming next.
DracOnyx
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good so far. I kept thinking about that movie Girl Interrupted through the psych ward thing. I like where this is going. Lookin forward to the next update.
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Update soon!!!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN WORK! DAMN IT TO HELL!! Grr..I'm only starting on chappie three, but I have to go to work, i JUST WANTED YOU TO KNOW, THIS STORY KICKS ASS!! WOOT!! Can't wait to rush home and finish it!! ^_^ Love to you!!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really interesting. I usually don't like to read fanfics that take place in psych wards because most of them are so wrong about what really goes on in mental institutions--I've been there, so I know. But your's was pretty accurate. Except in my experience, the staff are awesome--it's the shrinks everyone hates, and the staff keep a very close eye on everyone (you're never in a room without staff, besides your bedroom, and you can only go there at certain times) but this is just fiction so whatever. Anyway, the story line was great =) This story is really enjoyable. Just one thing- Okay, so Bakura and Ryou love each other, that's inferred by their actions, you don't have to keep saying it. But that could just be me, I hate it when stories get too gooey and lovey lol. So, good job so far, I can't wait for more!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!! I love the story so far!! ^^v I like the whole sychiatric ward theme! ^^ It's different! I really, really love your story!! I can't wait to see what happens! update soon!! ^^
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent story that is very well written. i look forward to reading more!! if you have an email update list, pls put me on it!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story, tho I lost track of it for a bit. Seems like you have some "inside knowledge"... me too, and you're getting the atmosphere spot-on. Oh, and I was just waiting to find out who was driving the car... I figured it'd be a main character that we knew, but I choked when I read it anyway. Very, very funny. Please update soon -- also, I haven't really noticed any typos yet, if it makes you feel better. Ja ne!
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Polite and an insane wild killer. 8-) Great combo you've got going in Ryou. It will be interesting to see what our three some get into now that all hell's broken loose at the asylum...