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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(1) means Love, Koi, or Beloved (related to a person) Is a Portuguese word.
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I KNEW I would, someday!!!!, find a brazilian girl in here. I just knew it... how could anyone stay tha long of a time away of Yaoi lovers?!
E sabe o que é mais engraçado? Eu super 'tava no clima de escutar Marisa Monte, over and over again. I guess this is fate the, ne?
Sim, (lerei o lemon depois da review, eu simplesmente não consegui aguentar), uma coisa que me incomodou bastante: sua escrita está boa, e a gramática correta, mas cuidado com os vocativos! You know, it's not "I love you too my hikari" but "I love you too, my hikari".
You just have to be more careful now ^.~. Good job
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I KNEW I would, someday!!!!, find a brazilian girl in here. I just knew it... how could anyone stay tha long of a time away of Yaoi lovers?!
E sabe o que é mais engraçado? Eu super 'tava no clima de escutar Marisa Monte, over and over again. I guess this is fate the, ne?
Sim, (lerei o lemon depois da review, eu simplesmente não consegui aguentar), uma coisa que me incomodou bastante: sua escrita está boa, e a gramática correta, mas cuidado com os vocativos! You know, it's not "I love you too my hikari" but "I love you too, my hikari".
You just have to be more careful now ^.~. Good job
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, i think that your shot was quit good!! congratulations! it was well written, simple, to the point of the moments that the public most enjoys! i don't know if you are a complete portuguese, but if you are let me say: parabens, tens um ingles excelente e continua assim, e pods msmo fazer outros fanfiction mais longos e por a mistura todas os hikaris e yamis! apenas uma sugestao! The end :)
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this I love it
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow me likey. and full of lemon goodness, great, yaoi forever. *blushes*
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well writen fanfic, and warm and fuzzy feeling there, cute in as well with the bow image, well done and a very good lemon, good work, keep it up. thumbs up,
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Had to come back to this one too, you are a good author
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You gotta love the co-existance of darkness and light, one can't be with out the other aaaaaahhhh shhhhhhwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetA!
Like honey!
Like honey!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww!!! So so so kawaii! I loved it! ^_^ Yami and Yugi are the cutest couple ever, plain and simple! There's just no arguing it:D I loved this fic and the wonderful lemon at the end:) Nice work:) Will you be writing another fic soon? *grins*
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, that's love alright, Atemu and Aibou forever, I like this so far, you should keep going, I got a high just reading this story. Y/Y is my Fav pairing.
The sweet little inocence, and his Dark beauty. Good fic, bravo. The lemons are nice and ripe.
The sweet little inocence, and his Dark beauty. Good fic, bravo. The lemons are nice and ripe.
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
In all honesty it was a real romantic story.
Im guessing your into romance anyways not my point besides it being romantic it was really orgasmic
*Blush*
Just being honest hope you don't mind ^.^
*blush*
In all honesty it was a real romantic story.
Im guessing your into romance anyways not my point besides it being romantic it was really orgasmic
*Blush*
Just being honest hope you don't mind ^.^
*blush*