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for An Egyptian Love Story

by AutumnRose

person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whee!!!! ^-^ Great chapter!!! Yay for saving Mokie!! *huggles* If you were having anything sexual between them at that young an age... *shudders* Not a big fan of that type of thingie. But this is going to be a great romance! I can tell! Keep them coming! Wish I was as diligent at updates as other authors. *shamful look* Well I shall keep looking for updates, and Dead Can Dance, as I've suddenly become fond of them! ^-^
person Juuni
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting One...I think you are a great writer. I like the others stories you wrote. Don't forget to update as soon as you can please. PLEASE! Bye.
person Patusca
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Yaoi forever. What happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Gaia
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...great start. I need to know what happen next so please update very soon. PLEASE!!! Bye for now.
person Yaoi Fan
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I LIKE IT! PLEASE UPDATE!!! Ja ne.
person Sushi
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is a great start. I'm very interested to see where you go with this and I hope that you update very soon.
person Sarah Costa
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting one. A great start. So what will happen to Yugi now, will he meet Atemu? Please update as soon as you can. I love Yami or Atemu and Yugi especially when they are together as lovers (my favorite yaoi pair). Keep up the great work. And thanks for send the picture. Ja ne.
person dragonkitty
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it when people research^^ When is the next update!!
person DracOnyx
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe, I'll review yours if you review mine *grin* how's that for shameless?

Great start, can't wait to see where you're going with this. Keep up the great work.

DracOnyx
person Loki
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good. All the Roma influence is really interesting, plus its a good story and a cute pairing. I hope you get the next chapter up soon! In the meantime....*wanders off to check out author's other story*

~Loki