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for An Egyptian Love Story

by AutumnRose

person tina
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was such a wonderfull story!!! i really want you to continue it and update soon. i cant wait to find out what happens next. there just arent enough past egyptian stories. you know with yami and seto as there past selves. it was truly wonderful and well written and had a surprisingly large vocabulary. pls continue!!!

~tina~
person Serin
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I loves what you have so far. Keep it up! Oh, and justa wondering one thing. You said that you would email a piccy of Bakura to people who haven't seen one. Can I be one of those people? :smiles: I beleive my email is attaced, but if not, here it is. Just take out the spaces:

Ken Ken_Lover@ hotmail.com
person PainfulRememberance
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update Update UPDATE!! Yugi and Atem lemon! Wonderful, I love it. I'm actually not a huge fan of Seth/Jono but I'll make an exception for your fic since its so great : ) so update please.
person Joy
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! Please update soon, with the lemon Jono/Seth. PLEASE!!!!!! Oh by the way, you asked to the readers to tell you about any mistake that the story could have. So after reading for the second time the three chapters I found a error and only one on the second chapter. You could find this error on the last paragraph in the sentence « Atemu couldn't...between his friend *THE THE* youngest roma boy.» You are a great writer! Ja ne.
person Ashley
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, honestly.

But hear and fear, I've read ALL your stories (at least presented on mm.org) but NEVER got myself to review! (shame myself)
I finally got myself into doing so, and I am really glad to here say myself, that you are a GREAT author! Heard me right, Gotta love you and your stories ^^ keep on!
person Juuni
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! Great chapter!!! Please update soon. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!
Ja ne.
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy new year!!!*blows party favors and glomps you*

aaaawwwwww. this is so great! I cant wait to read more! And yes! of course we want a Seto and Jou lemon!!! they're like the next cutest pairing after yami/yugi!! ohhh and can i get that pic of Kurah (see i used kurah not bakura :hint hint:) in his ancient eygpt getup? i'm sure it's uber drool worthy just because it a picture of bakura. i'm sooooooo happy that you haven't decided to change bakura's personality too much. i mean, bakura just isn't bakura without a few homicidal/insane moments. not that it would matter. i'd love him either way. it's just that i happen to prefer the insane/ homicidal side of him a little bit more. *big evil grin* anyway, looking foward to your update. so until then, ja!
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoy ur story very much... i would be the last to complain about a lemon in the next chapter...please update asap!!
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD:hehe poor yugi dont you just hate it when ppl misjudge what they first see when they look at yugi and yes i did see the little situation between seto and mokuba coming hehe course jous gonna be in trouble if he messes with yugi again mister kitten can easily turn himself into a fierce siberian Tiger quite easily hehe Go yugi its your birthday were gonna party like it ya birthday hehe and pls make a atemu/yugi lemon soon pls i MUST SEE AN ATEMU/YUGI LEMON hehe sry dont mean to be loud but i love that pairing to no end now were was i oh yes * turn into her celestial form large blood red wings with a blood red silk shirt, blood red leather jacket,pants,blood red high heeled leather boots,and blood red leather fingerless gloves and an anger like a thousand mt st hellens and unleashes a fire comet at the persian lord and the slave traders til there burnt to a sinder*almost forgot one other reason for hating you two thats for actually thinking that seto would make A KID let alone is own brother a concupine PLEASE the mans bordering on obssesive with how protective he is of mokuba not that thats a bad thing mind ya yamis no better really well Autumn looking forward to an update soon JA NE and dont forget to keep up the great work and update ^___~
person serebii_faerii
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! I can't believe I just found this! O.o;; Why didn't I find this sooner!? I'm totally into the Egyptian stories! And Yami/Yugi is my favorite pairing! XD You're doing a wonderful job on this too! Everyone's in character! And the gypsies are very interesting! I'm learning so many new things!

BTW, Bakura's Egyptian name was neither Bakura or Kurah. It was Akefia, and he was known as the King of Thieves. XD Just thought I'd let you know, but you could use Bakura or Kurah. Either one works. Actually you could call him Pooper-Scoooper for all the world cares! But he might not like that.

Anyway, please update soon because you're doing something really great here! (another BTW: I don't know what that white skirt thing is either. ¿.¿ Sorry...I know I saw a story floating around on ff.net that had the proper name for it, but who knows where it is now...oh well)