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for An Egyptian Love Story

by AutumnRose

person k.C
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad your not quitting I was getting worried there I love this story and you otehr ones so I hope you can update soon and I look forward to new chapters. I know how it is to be swamepd with major amounts of work so if anybody gives you a bad time just tell me and I'll take care of them ^_^
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: there called Kilts Autumn just like what the scottish ppl call the kilts they were its the same thing and another thing im not sure if u said it right but the neck piece yugi wears is called a torc and i knew that Kaiba wouldnt hurt yugi i knew the reason behind Atemu's and Seth's relieved looks Atemu glad cuz that ment yugi was his through and through with no one else puting claim on him and seth glac cuz THATS HIS BROTHER DAMMIT for one thing for another like Seth would be caught dead touching and harming a kid come on u persion jerkwad does seth LOOK like pedophile to u if u do then u need ur head examined just cuz Seth is named after the Egyption god who DID key word did as in dosnt do it nymore harm a child does not mean seth himself would do it no in a a billion years and Jou nock off the comentary got it i luv ya to death and would fight tooth and nail to keep u from harm ask Maggie if u dont believe me but if u put one more wise crack on Yugi or his heritage and who he is not only will i making stick ur own foot in your mouth ill kick u steet punk ass all the way to hell see if i wont hmph well Autumn u just try in a graceful and effortless manner to update soon i almost forgot about this story i thought it looked familiar hehe well if u need ny punishments given u just give me the name and ill put them on the chopping block gtg now JA NE ^__^
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*huggles you* so glad to hear that you are not giving up on this fic. i will definitely be looking foward to your future updates. so until then, ja. ^__^
person Chibi-Rose
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like this story, it is really good! Please up date! ^_^
person chaos
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story but you havent updated it in so long. you should post more chapters.
person Ravenna
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you going to update? please do! *puppy dog eyes* please, please? i read this on ff.net but it wasnt finished there either. thankies! ~Ravenna and her Yami
person sweetblood
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay hey this is a great fic i kent waite for the next chap one thing can u put more kaiba and jono thank u
person Arainaina
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very good, I can't wait to see how Mokuba will react when he learns that he and Seto are Brothers???? Also very funny on the minor fight between Yugi and Jono, but what I'm curious about is Jono's reaction when he learns about Mokuba being Seto's baby brother and that Seto's also a Gypsy for I don't think Seto told him about it or Atemu for that matter oh the suspense.

Anyway awesome work. I really enjoyed and hope you update again soon.
person Carinito
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT. Oh no i'm... addicted to the story now. Wait that isn't bad. hehe
Please upate soon. Awaiting to review. Does that make sense? all well.
person yami nefertira
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is great, cant wait to see whats next, please update soon. ^_^