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for Mountain Trip

by NightRain

person nicky
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO this is sooooooo funny!
It's so like Jou to start singing that song... and the whole cheeseburger incident...
what's going on with the backpack?
and why does he have a lighter???
uhm...
what else? oh, yeah! I'm so glad the cellphone didn't work! :D
person Felidae
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Yeah, but I sure that Kaiba's more that happy to have something else other that a stick up his butt!"
I nearly fell off my chair reading that line-evil, eevil my dear, hehehee...
Aside of the bad grammar, this is a very enjoyable fic, and I'm waiting to see who will try to kill whom first(heheheee, "I love you-cheeseburger!", heheheee...^^)
person Dark_KittyCat
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im really starting to like this story hope you update soon, i give you my compliments and my ttfn
person Minako
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooooooh please continue!i luv it
person Dark_KittyCat
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked it but you sure where cruel by making so short anyways hope you update soon
person kcalbskwah
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ like that so pertrays them, i like hope u update soon, it's like not fair that you left a cliff hanger, but like i totally liked your story!
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM

^^Hehe. I like this stroy, can't wait for the next chappie!!

person bakurasgirl
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what Joey and Seto do in this fic....*thinks happy yaoi thoughts*