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for Dark Soulmate

by AutumnRose

person Arainaina
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Yugi and them I can't believe they were hurt. *cries* Anyway awesome work but I would have thought you would have put the actual chapters in that to show what happen to them for as much as I hate to see Yugi hurt I can't help but like seeing Yami go into a fit of rage for someone hurting his Hikari.
person Jessica
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!...I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this fic so far! When are you coming back to finish it?...Beautiful intro, btw, the description of their moonlit rendezvous was steaming fuckin' hot! I really love how Bakura can be so subdued when he's around Ryou; it's nice to see the quite ones in control! I hope you kick that vampire yami's ass and save Bakura from the Shadow Realm (though there is little doubt in my mind that he can hold his own in such a crisis)! Anyway, I just wanted you to know that you still have fans! PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPDATE; GET THOSE PROVERBIAL JUICES FLOWIN'! We'll be waiting! Ja and good luck! ^-^
person Terri
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou..poor Yugi..hell..poor all the hikaris!!!..Great chapter!! Can't wait for the next update!!
person Yamima
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
I WANT TO READ MORE! (throwing tantrum)


Cool fic so far, I love it. Can't wait for an update.


HIKARI'S AND YAMI'S FOREVER!
person Yana
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Yami/Yugi
they are the only couples i love
person Sarah Costa
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! Keep up the good work. Please update soon. I'm sorry but I can't draw because I a disaster. Ja ne.
person aspiker
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally read vamp fics but decided to read yours. Chapter 1 is showing some real promise. That cliffie is an evil one. 8-)

The writing of Ryou's point of view while walking the path to Bakura is good. It is like being in his head. Keep up the good work. 8-) 8-)
person aspiker
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally caugh up with the story so far... I am enjoying the plotting and writing of this. I was hoping to find a longer tale from you and now there is one! BTW - "My poor carpet"...what a classic line! hehehe 8-)

Keep up the good work!