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Thanks hon! I love it so far! *^-^*

This looks like the beginning of an interesting holiday tale. YY/YB is not often done which is too bad since there is a lot of possibilities. I can't wait to see where you take this story. 8-)

aspiker

I'm afraid I couldn't read it. There seems to be an error on the site where a lot of the words are cut off for me on this story. Do you have it any other place perhaps? I'd love to read it if you do!

So far I want to grab my camera and run to the park.....just to get a priceless picture of Bakura in a TREE! (I also have the urge to flap my wings and tweet at him*snicker*) I love this! I can't wait to see what's on day two! Only one little-bitty thing....orecalcos.....I'm pretty sure it's spelled 'orichalcos.' In the true story of Atlantis (as told by Plato), the temple to Poseidon and Cleito had orichalcum -a reddish metal only found in Atlantis- in it. In Latin it was called 'aurichalcum', which was derived from the ancient Greek word 'oreichalkon'.......crap, I'm rambling....I'll shush up. You're doing a superb job!!