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for Twelve Days

by DracOnyx

person MarikIshtar77
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You are like the ultimate updating machine! Excellent chapter(s)!!!!!(I've been busy shopping and hating Christmas to death, I got behiond in reading a little. At least this fic is making this stupid season tolerable!) I love how you torment Yami and Bakura. Superb work!
person Deb
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaa!!!!
*sobs*
please fix it and make it better again!! i beg of you!!!
pleeeease!!!!
Such a great chappie huni!!!
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs
person Nelly
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo- (continues for 5 minutes) Why is Bakura so stubborn! What will happen next? Will Bakura really hurt Joey?!
person LadyGrey
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. my.. gods... this is so kawaii, Drac! It's such a great story, please continue to update (at your leisure, dear, no straining) and keep up the 'Kura torture! Love it, just love it. And I like your chapter titles, too. Oh, and, err... coughGoingOncoughcough... ya know, whenever. Ja ne!
person Deb
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee!!!
This is soooo good!!!
Haha i was dying of laughter from Bakuras reaction to Joey and Yami together!
I can just imagine that!
Hehehe!
Great chapter huni!
Please update again soonies!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person MarikIshtar77
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is it just me, or is a jealous tomb-robber a very sexy thing? Excellent chapter, by the way. I love the whole "Make Bakura jealous" concept. I'm actually surprised he didn't throw Joey out the friggin' window! I also have to agree with Bakura's dislike of Christmas crap.....It's SO bloody annoying!!
person aspiker
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better! 8-) I hope though that Joey does not get a one way trip to the Shadow Realm for Christmas...
person Ken-z
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey ocne agin I liek this story I cant remeber if I reviewed thisone or not but
regardless atht I did or not I still like your storys.....please update I would be really really happy if you could have liek a sudden up date of four chapters I crave for more of this story it
had me out of seat squelling with happiness...I know your good at lemons from you previous storys such as "Gravitation"
person aspiker
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad to hear you are doing better. 8-)

Goodness, 2 confused horney yamis and 1 drunk to boot. 8-) The next chapter should be interesting.... hehe 8-)
person Deb
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
W00t!!
Great chappie!!
Hot yami/kura stuffs! Yum!!!
God i love this story! It just keeps getting better and better!!!
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs xxx