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-Bakura and Marik jumped into the Well and landed on their asses. Marik winced and rubbed his butt.
“Can’t we put some pillows on the grass here or something? How come jumping into paradise hurts? You would think that there’d be no pain here.”

*LMFAO! Awww...poor Marik! I can't believe he didn't asked Bakura to kiss it for him! *snicker*

-Marik stopped shoveling. “Yami wouldn’t sink so low as to use Commoner’s Magic….no offense, Itemri.”
“None taken…..I’ll beat you later for that comment.”

*wOOT! Can we watch?

"I’ll beat you later for that comment.”
Hopefully on Seto's piano again?

A black flying fortress hovered in the sky.
Ohhhhhh cooool!

Bakura saw a black portal on the wall. Aria had a bad habit of forgetting to close her portals.
*giggles* not commenting about leaving things open. Sorry..

Bakura gasped. ‘She wouldn’t….go there….would she?’
*smirks* wanna make a bet??

Bakura grinned devilishly and grabbed between Marik’s legs. “You mean here?”
*falls over laughing* Stick-shift dragon!

“Ra….go! Itemri….get your hands away from my crotch! You’re unbelievable!”
Whoa... who'd a thunk that Marik would actually object to Bakura playing with his rod. *blinks innocently*

Marik winced and rubbed his butt.
“Can’t we put some pillows on the grass here or something? How come jumping into paradise hurts? You would think that there’d be no pain here.”
*cackles madly* and yet Bakura doesn't offer to kiss it better...

Poor poor aria. I have a question...how did Kailani get AIDS? (small typo in your story-you put SIDS inteads of AIDS) How did she get it? Because if she was born with it, that means that Aria has it too!

Suddenly he found himself tackled to the ground by Aten.
Cool! Action Movie Star Aten....

The weapons fired and Marik fell backwards onto the ground.
You know, I'm mad at you for shooting Marik. Now who's gonna crack jokes about his rod? *pouts*

“FIREPOWER!” the pyromaniac cried out as he threw the lit stick of dynamite towards the car racing towards Jay.
Oooooooooo I want firepower like that! *laughs*

Seto ran for Jaimen and held his son. “Jaimen, say something! Say something to daddy! Please don’t be dead!”
*taps foot* you know... he better be okay or I may just have to throw sharp objects at you!

“Asher! You’ve been shot in the wrist!”
“Oh,” the man said calmly. “I was wondering why the burn felt so good.”
*snickers and sings* "Burns so good. Come on baby, make it burn so good."

"Does it feel any different to you?”
*cackles* At least Seto didn't ask that when Joey had a handfull of CEO weiner...

She burst in on her sleeping parents. “MOMMY, KAILANI’S NOT BREATHING!”
*snarls* You had to stick me with an even more evil cliffhanger. Hmpf. you booger snot.

Kailani!!! U wish she didn't have to die!!! *cries* she was so cute!!!!!! Poor Jaimen...but i'm glade he'll be alright. What about Jay and Karl? Are they alright?

Now that's a hell of a wedding day! One that won't be forgotten...by anybody...ever!
Lots of violence, people shot, many dead, and even more injured. I bet it makes world news headlines!
Oooh...BAD! Lani! Yami needs such a brutal ass kicking for putting that curse on Aria..it's so unfair!
Great chapter! Chaos and lemons are such a good thing when shaken, not stirred.

I know I haven'r reviewed in awhile. I have been busy with school and other things. *hugs the Seto plushie* Thanks! iI love it! I swear, you almost had me crying throughout this chappie, and it takes alot to make me cry. I can't believe all this happened. *sighs* But I guess with all the homophobes living in the city, there's not much that can be done, huh? I am so glad that Jaimen is okay. If you killed him off I would have been so upset. Now...I am upset with the cliffie. Please let Lanie be okay!! I don't want Aria to be hurt.

OMG!!! I can't believe the Blue-Eyes and Red-Eyes mated!!! That is just so adorable!!! That was such a great idea of yours. Finally, Seto and Joey are married. They're such a good couple...even though I wish it were me and Seto...but that's just my unhealthy obsession with Seto talking. I can't wait for you to update! I hope that loud noise isn't just a sign of a disaster weaiting to happen.

*grabs all the chibis and holds them behind her* stay behind me chibis!!! this could get UGLY!!! Promise me that nobody is gonna die...or be disabled...or go insane...again....please? I'll give you more cookies...? And YAY!! for Aten and Robbie for finding a priest to do their ceremony!!! I'm glade that they did.

“Did you try pushing the ‘On’ button?”
*smirks* was it plugged in??

“Aww…it’s an albino dragon!” Aten said with a smile.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

“Are you obsessed about your Rod?”
*cackles* but what an object to obsess about....

Donny sat with Alice and his four children in a pew. “Asher, you be a good boy and I’ll give you a pack of matches.”
Asher sat in the pew silent and still. “Yes, Donny.”
*laughs*

Ivy and Lily turned their basket of flowers upside down at the front of the altar and skipped to the pew where their father sat.
LOL what, they didn't dump any on each other??

Donny reached for the revolver in his pocket and Alice slapped his hand.
“No, dear.”
*howls* Love this....

Marik leaned over to Aten. “You can go, Aten. We’ll wait for you. Traffic’s going to be a real bitch getting out of here----OW!”
Malik slapped Marik on the back of the head. “This is a church! No cursing!”
*laughs* Nice smack there...

Aten snickered. “Preparation is fun.”
Robbie groaned as he hobbled beside Aten. “You’re just like your dad…and that’s scary.”
and Marik missed the opportunity to strut....

Robbie playfully slapped Aten’s arm. “I take that back…you’re worse than your dad.”
*laughs* Hopefully Marik never finds that out. He'll have to change his behavior to compete!

Xiao-Shen and Ceres turned towards the gate. “What’s that noise?”
figures, you'd stick me with a cliffhanger!