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Ok, i've been so lazy about reviewing this wonderful fic lately. -____- bad me...any way...loved
the lime, and that flash back was so adorable! Poor little Aria...Cuteness. ^__^ *squishes Aria plushie* Now, as for the gifts....heeheee...
body paint and a huge yaoi porn collection for Aten and Robbie! whee!

I cannot let the word spread of my true nature.
*snickers* too late, we already know you're an ass!!!

“All I smell is car exhaust and hot air.”
*laughs* yeah, that hot air is yami

//How come everything with the Ishtars begins and ends with the nutsack????! If it’s not their Rod their obsessed with, it’s that! Ishtars….can’t live with them, can’t have hot sex without them.//
*falls over laughing*

“Stipper Anzu? Isis, I just ate.”
Damn, now I wish I could get another beer!

“THE MILLENNIUM TRIDENT!”
*giggles* Lookee! It's the giant Sennen Fork!

His body was covered with sweat which began to creep down his body.
Ooooo sweaty 'Kura!

The white-haired yami looked up and saw the Trident had pierced the pharaoh’s chest....
Bakura narrowed his eyes and twisted the Millennium Trident, tearing inside the pharaoh.
WOOHOO *cheers and claps*

Under different circumstances, it would have been funny to see Maxine piled on top of Malik in a heap.
*laughs* Malik's gonna be so bummed he "slept" through that!!

"I impaled him with the Millennium Trident.”
*cackles* he stabbed him with the Sennen Fork. OHHHHHHHHHHH He forked the Pharaoh!! *falls over howling*

‘Kill if you must…..but kill with a reason.’
*laughs* typical

“Or what are you going to do? Frisk me like a naughty little girl that I am?”
*laughs*

Marik snickered. “Can I take my pants off, too?”
Yes, yes, yes!!

Miranda shook her head. “Shirt will be fine. Trust me.”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW dang

"Don’t make me imagine my mom kissing my dad THERE!”
*laughs* like that's a bad thing?

Bubble gum-scented bubbles? Uhm.... ooookayyyyy. Although, I guess I can see that causing Marik to want to, umm, blow something. *smirks*

The hikari closed his eyes awaiting the inevitable contact……
Marik falling into the tub? *snickers*

*GASP!* You! You're so BAD!!! You cut it off right at the nummy lemony part!!! All in all, I'd have to say that was one of the sexiest chapters so far yet. Shirtless bishies...are sexy. OOH! and Bubble Gum bathy stuff RULES! I steal it from the kids all the time. LOL

Good chapter. I see a bit of growing in this in the part of the author. Keep up the good work.

Shame on you for the cliffie! That's not nice! Malik can't burn to death! No, no, no...Yami can, but not Malik. Oh, and thanks for the lovely mental picture you sent of Anzu doing her wiggly thing, that was the highlight of my day. *snicker*
Great chapter! Keep it coming! *hugs*

Hey I love your stories and i've finallyy cougth uuup with alof them Ii have atwo queestioons though one int the sssame reeealy why doees bakura think he can stand achance agaisnt yami whe he alwayse ends up with the short end of the stick . I mean he has been captured a few times and and was beaten and raped and he also belongs to yami or did he forgeet that. also Will yami try to reclam his slave or bakrua agian for keeps again i hhope not because i love bakura . im just wondering where your going with thiss. thanks .
neko

Hey I need to ask a question i should no alreeay probaly so please forgive me :) Is Anibus go for good or will he be back and has Bakura gotten over his fear of Yami or is he all talk I hope he can fight yami off suscfuly this time . Ii hope Yami will be good agian somedday and sees the errors of his ways . and what is this obbsision with Bbakura yami has if he hateees him why doees he want to own him. and i no i have a sick mind but if he wher mine i would decrate him and gosd and take care of him like a prized hors not beat him to dath now thats out of lmy sessstem an you probaly think im wierd ffby now and im jusst catching up on reviewing beccause ii haaave been busy . good storie and keepp up the good work . star.

“Too much clothing. Off now!”
Sheesh, impatient much? *g*

A subsequent laugh filled the backyard. “ROBBIE’S GOT LADIES’ UNDERWEAR IN HIS HAIR!”
*starts humming 'walking 'round in women's underwear*

“Today has nothing to do with gentle.”
*laughs* A proper theme for Mondays

Robbie sighed. “Oh…..Crap-olla. What the heck is she doing to him to make Aten react like this?”
*falls over laughing* Umm, my first guess would be: having sex. *nods* My second guess would be: screwing. Third guess: making the beast with two backs. *cackles* Think I've guessed right yet?

"Poor Umi’s not going to be able to walk for a month.”
*cackles* He'll walk, just with a limp and a big grin!

wow, cliffhanger. Figures. *smirks*

If that doesn't get Aria pregnant, damn, I don't know what will. Poor Umi...poor Aten...poor Robbie. (Undies on Robbie's head! LMAO! Poor kid...I feel bad for laughing, but it's funny!)
It would be so funny if Marik found a way to reverse the curse and have it affect that damn Pharaoh the same way it's affecting Aria.
Malik is cool. Hands down, he's cool. He just went to bed....while the house was shaking. LMAO! (I would have thrown condoms at them and told them to keep the noise down. *snicker*)
I hope they catch the Pharaoh before he gets to Isis, or they at least hurt him some how. If not, well, that's bad. Yams needs to be stopped. He's too mean!! (Maybe he's like Sampson; shave his head and all his powers are gone...YEAH! BALD PHARAOH! *snort*)
Enjoy your vacation, deary!

He passed out, just like you said he would. I hope you do another Robbie/Aten soon. I get the whole mental holiday. I`m on one, in a couple of weeks that is. I just finished up redoing my links section in my group and and now have to do the other group, where I will be putting up a couple of links for some info websites that I found. I`m on overload and ready to blow. I need to sit back and do another one-shot. They always relax me. Oh well.