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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My friend Mallory showed me your stories... and I fell in love with them. I LOVE THEM! I especially love Aten x Robbie...
they are so KAWAII! I'm really hoping to reading a lemon with both of them... hehe. I can't wait until you update... I can't! I almost cried
when I read that Aten died... but I'm glad that he doesn't die completely. **cheers** **death hugs Aten and Robbie** I love your writing!
**sighs in happiness** urm... sorry if i'm babbling here... just so... HAPPY! hehe... urm... thank you for taking the time to read this... hehe!
Have a great day ^_^ Buh bye!
~§etusko
they are so KAWAII! I'm really hoping to reading a lemon with both of them... hehe. I can't wait until you update... I can't! I almost cried
when I read that Aten died... but I'm glad that he doesn't die completely. **cheers** **death hugs Aten and Robbie** I love your writing!
**sighs in happiness** urm... sorry if i'm babbling here... just so... HAPPY! hehe... urm... thank you for taking the time to read this... hehe!
Have a great day ^_^ Buh bye!
~§etusko
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^-^ hello! We really love this story.
Uke Io: Ne, I was just wondering. When are you going to have a Robby/Aten lemon??????
Uke Io: Ne, I was just wondering. When are you going to have a Robby/Aten lemon??????
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryou sighed and staggered to the couch. His shoulder sagged and he started sobbing.
awww, poor Ryou...
“We should ask Miranda to come talk to her.”
Awww, Aten the brain! Smart boy.
“Trigonometric formulas.”
fucking a... how does he not sprain his tongue saying that??
“I mean it, Itemri! You are not going to sex your way out of this! "
I know it's a serious scene and all, but this part was funny.
‘At least he’s not pulling my pants off.’
Not yet anyway....
Marik felt Bakura trying to pull down his jeans.
SEEE! I told you! *cackles* okay, okay... I know it's supposed to be serious.
“Prove it. Go home and be the father that your child needs right now, Bakura.”
Yeah, so there! *sticks tongue out*
Malik narrowed his eyes. “Who do you think you are, Bakura Itemri?! Punching Ryou and storming off like that! You had the tantrum of a two year old!"
Ooooo Malik's got claws!!!
Awwwww cute father/daughter reunion...
Before I knew it, I was alone in the night.
My opportunity to tell Aten how I felt was gone.
awwww, poor Robbie.
Wow, Seto and Joey have been together for that long? Damn, they're getting old. *ducks*
Damn... Seto lost another person. Not good.
Awwww Poor Asher... I keep forgetting how childlike that guy can sound.
Geez... guns and bombs. Isn't this called overkill???
Seto ran to his desk and saw the three year olds sitting around Seto’s jars of candy.
*laughs* Oooo many kids on sugar high now!!
“Awia sowed us,” Ivy said with a giggle.
Seto shook his head. “I’m going to have to talk to her…….again….about this.”
Seto took away the bowl of candy from Xiao-Shen. “Xiao-Shen, this is the sugar free candy! Who showed you where this was?”
“Aten-kun sow me candy wif no sugar.”
Seto sighed. “Looks like I’ll have to have a few words with him, too.”
*laughs hysterically*
“Great…..I was shot at, my building nearly blown to kingdom come, and I just realize that we are living with not one, but two Chibi Arias.”
Yup Seto, it's Monday.
The child snickered. “Two men kissing…..funny.”
*laughs* that's just too damned cute!
*pulls out personal impliments of destruction* Okay, I'm all set for Thursday.
awww, poor Ryou...
“We should ask Miranda to come talk to her.”
Awww, Aten the brain! Smart boy.
“Trigonometric formulas.”
fucking a... how does he not sprain his tongue saying that??
“I mean it, Itemri! You are not going to sex your way out of this! "
I know it's a serious scene and all, but this part was funny.
‘At least he’s not pulling my pants off.’
Not yet anyway....
Marik felt Bakura trying to pull down his jeans.
SEEE! I told you! *cackles* okay, okay... I know it's supposed to be serious.
“Prove it. Go home and be the father that your child needs right now, Bakura.”
Yeah, so there! *sticks tongue out*
Malik narrowed his eyes. “Who do you think you are, Bakura Itemri?! Punching Ryou and storming off like that! You had the tantrum of a two year old!"
Ooooo Malik's got claws!!!
Awwwww cute father/daughter reunion...
Before I knew it, I was alone in the night.
My opportunity to tell Aten how I felt was gone.
awwww, poor Robbie.
Wow, Seto and Joey have been together for that long? Damn, they're getting old. *ducks*
Damn... Seto lost another person. Not good.
Awwww Poor Asher... I keep forgetting how childlike that guy can sound.
Geez... guns and bombs. Isn't this called overkill???
Seto ran to his desk and saw the three year olds sitting around Seto’s jars of candy.
*laughs* Oooo many kids on sugar high now!!
“Awia sowed us,” Ivy said with a giggle.
Seto shook his head. “I’m going to have to talk to her…….again….about this.”
Seto took away the bowl of candy from Xiao-Shen. “Xiao-Shen, this is the sugar free candy! Who showed you where this was?”
“Aten-kun sow me candy wif no sugar.”
Seto sighed. “Looks like I’ll have to have a few words with him, too.”
*laughs hysterically*
“Great…..I was shot at, my building nearly blown to kingdom come, and I just realize that we are living with not one, but two Chibi Arias.”
Yup Seto, it's Monday.
The child snickered. “Two men kissing…..funny.”
*laughs* that's just too damned cute!
*pulls out personal impliments of destruction* Okay, I'm all set for Thursday.
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy New Year, huni!!! Great chapter! I knew Bakura would come to his senses! It was amusing picturing him groveling infront of Ryou. *Hears Ishtar's snickering in the background*
Hugs to Aten and Aria!!!
I can't wait to see what you're cooking up in hell's kitchen for the next chapter!
*Hugz*
Hugs to Aten and Aria!!!
I can't wait to see what you're cooking up in hell's kitchen for the next chapter!
*Hugz*
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Do you think he took the news okay?”
Aten looked around. “Seeing as the school is still standing and both of us are still alive, I’d say ‘yes’ to that.”
*laughs* Scary part is, he's serious!
“I heard your sister has a ‘bun in the oven.’ Too bad I couldn’t stick something into her and watch it bake.”
ew... he's already the product of inbreeding!
“Keep your eye on this one, Jenny. This one is a sweet-talker like his daddy.”
*laughs* Boy ain't that the truth!!!
“Make him an appointment, Jenny. This way Mr. Sweeter-Than-Honey can be on his way.”
*howls* sweeter than honey... That's so cute!!
“So! This is your meeting with Gabby! I didn’t know Gabby was old and hairy!”
*shrieks* OOOO 10 points!
Aria just watches her brother get roughed up?!?! Stupid stupid stupid!!!
"I thought my sister would have more brain cells in her head than to think that he loves her."
*snorts* Dude, she's not thinking with her brain cells
I walked in and saw Robbie put a pillow over his German textbook.
*laughs* Other boys hide their comics or porn... Robbie hides his schoolwork. Gotta love that
“But, I want that fish, Robbie. I want Aria. I want to be with her.”
awwwww, poor Umi.
“This is my bitch. My good bitch.”
Oy... good first impression. Numbnuts
Ryou rolled his eyes. “Yes, he’s gotten older and fatter! Aria, please! Listen to me!”
*falls over laughing* Old, hairy and fat. OOOOO Keith, you've really let yourself go to pot. *snickers* Calling Marik 'Pops' and then having the audacity to looking worse that a guy who is 5000 years old? Dude, you really do suck.
*snorks* Stubborn as a jackass, Bakura and Aria... yep! That fits!
“Father didn’t want me going out with nice guys…..so I chose to go out with scum.”
yeah... that's a really good excuse. *rolls eyes*
“I won’t need you to protect me, Aten! I can take care of myself! I’ll never need you!”
*snorts* famous last words....
“She’s going to be fine, Aten,” he said flatly before returning inside.
Ohhhh even Marik knows what's coming...
“I felt…..angry. I blacked out. I didn’t realize I did it. Forgive me, father.”
Oooooo.... I wonder who he really wanted to hit; Yami Aten or himself?
Okay I sort of feel sorry for Aria.... I feel worse for Umi though. *shrugs* Strange but true.
The teen curled up on the couch and put his head on his father’s lap. Marik ran his fingers through Aten’s hair slowly.
Awwwww, such a cute picture.
“Ass-rammer Seto Kaiba"
I still say this sounds like a wrester's name! *snickers*
Eric cracked his knuckles. “That Morgan kid is mine! Mr. Know-It-All going to get a bullet in his brain if I have anything to say about it.”
I hope Eric dies first. I'd like to see some Eric origami!
Sheesh as if Seto hasn't been through enough...
Aten looked around. “Seeing as the school is still standing and both of us are still alive, I’d say ‘yes’ to that.”
*laughs* Scary part is, he's serious!
“I heard your sister has a ‘bun in the oven.’ Too bad I couldn’t stick something into her and watch it bake.”
ew... he's already the product of inbreeding!
“Keep your eye on this one, Jenny. This one is a sweet-talker like his daddy.”
*laughs* Boy ain't that the truth!!!
“Make him an appointment, Jenny. This way Mr. Sweeter-Than-Honey can be on his way.”
*howls* sweeter than honey... That's so cute!!
“So! This is your meeting with Gabby! I didn’t know Gabby was old and hairy!”
*shrieks* OOOO 10 points!
Aria just watches her brother get roughed up?!?! Stupid stupid stupid!!!
"I thought my sister would have more brain cells in her head than to think that he loves her."
*snorts* Dude, she's not thinking with her brain cells
I walked in and saw Robbie put a pillow over his German textbook.
*laughs* Other boys hide their comics or porn... Robbie hides his schoolwork. Gotta love that
“But, I want that fish, Robbie. I want Aria. I want to be with her.”
awwwww, poor Umi.
“This is my bitch. My good bitch.”
Oy... good first impression. Numbnuts
Ryou rolled his eyes. “Yes, he’s gotten older and fatter! Aria, please! Listen to me!”
*falls over laughing* Old, hairy and fat. OOOOO Keith, you've really let yourself go to pot. *snickers* Calling Marik 'Pops' and then having the audacity to looking worse that a guy who is 5000 years old? Dude, you really do suck.
*snorks* Stubborn as a jackass, Bakura and Aria... yep! That fits!
“Father didn’t want me going out with nice guys…..so I chose to go out with scum.”
yeah... that's a really good excuse. *rolls eyes*
“I won’t need you to protect me, Aten! I can take care of myself! I’ll never need you!”
*snorts* famous last words....
“She’s going to be fine, Aten,” he said flatly before returning inside.
Ohhhh even Marik knows what's coming...
“I felt…..angry. I blacked out. I didn’t realize I did it. Forgive me, father.”
Oooooo.... I wonder who he really wanted to hit; Yami Aten or himself?
Okay I sort of feel sorry for Aria.... I feel worse for Umi though. *shrugs* Strange but true.
The teen curled up on the couch and put his head on his father’s lap. Marik ran his fingers through Aten’s hair slowly.
Awwwww, such a cute picture.
“Ass-rammer Seto Kaiba"
I still say this sounds like a wrester's name! *snickers*
Eric cracked his knuckles. “That Morgan kid is mine! Mr. Know-It-All going to get a bullet in his brain if I have anything to say about it.”
I hope Eric dies first. I'd like to see some Eric origami!
Sheesh as if Seto hasn't been through enough...
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You'll never guess what I just finished watching. It was a hentai movie (Don't think of me weird. It was mine and my boyfriend's anniversary today...3 years! woo!) and it ended scarily like what happened in one of your previos fic in this series. You know how Ryou slept with both Bakura and Marik and had the twins one belonging to each? Well that same thing happened in the movie! I was like "OMG! It's like the fanfiction!". I just thought it was so ironic. Anyway, Keith must die. I don't like him being with Aria. It's just so wrong. I could never picture her sleeping with him. *shudders*
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank god I found you fics somewhere else. I can`t get onto mediaminer. I`m not what is going on and I had my computer checked. It`s not on my end. Oh well, enough of that. I just read the next chapter (7) and I hate those friggin idiots. Let me guess that guy at the end was Yami. If they hurt Aten I will never forgive them. And don`t you dare let them hurt Robbie. I love all of your stories and can`t enough, never stop. je ne.
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Marik grinned at Bakura. “So do I. Let’s go, Itemri.”
*cackles* violent films: better than Viagra for Yamis (okay, healthy ones).
“Well, after we sedate Father Bakura, he will still feel like raising hell.”
*laughs* true, very true!
“Even at fifteen years old, he still manages to collapse anywhere when he gets tired.”
*howls* it's so damned cute! Hell, I know boys that do that into their 20s!
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay *sings* Malik got his lemon!
“He won’t take this lightly, Ryou. Be prepared for anything. You know Bakura may have changed, but he is still Bakura. He can be unpredictable.”
Ding ding ding ding ding Understatement of the year award goes to Malik Ishtar!
“You pulled my pants off and threw your boxers onto the front lawn. Honestly, Itemri…..what if a kid came by and saw your underwear on the lawn?”
*falls over laughing* Lawn Ornaments! *cackles*
“What is it with you and contorting your lovers like a pretzel? You know, Ishtar, there are some ways that men were not meant to bend.”
*pauses to drool* Ooooo flexible, bennnnndy
“How long does this last, mother? I’m so tired of feeling sick in the morning!”
*snickers* Can't wait till she starts hearing the horror stories about the women who have morning sickness for at least 6 months.
Aten opened the front door and heard a cry of pain.
“ATEN, THAT’S MY HEAD YOU HIT!” Robbie cried out in pain.
*falls over laughing hysterically* Took his mind off his foot for a moment though!
“Why not do something radical like…..enjoy a day off from school?”
“And do nothing?”
Ummm, am I the only one who thinks he's beginning to sound like Seto?? *smirks*
Aten snickered. ‘After his reaction to the video in health class, I wouldn’t be surprised if doesn’t want to be anywhere near the delivery room.’
*laughs* I can see him reaching for Seto's stomach medication.
No rage.
No movement.
Just…..stillness.
Eeep *dives for the nearest bomb shelter*
Marik and Malik didn’t see the fast hand that connected with Bakura’s cheek.
whoa.... Ryou walloped Bakura? Shiiiiit, he's gonna pay for that.
"And I refuse to be the monster to my kids that you used to be to me.”
Oooooo and there's the punch.
“Bakura?” Ryou looked around. “’Kura?”
Silence.
Ohhh boy...
Yami laughed. “Time to pin some dirt on Bakura.”
*snort* and it gets worse....
“This is only the beginning,”
I'm thinking that Yami's not gonna have to do much pinning of dirt. Bakura's doing a good job of getting dirty himself.
*cackles* violent films: better than Viagra for Yamis (okay, healthy ones).
“Well, after we sedate Father Bakura, he will still feel like raising hell.”
*laughs* true, very true!
“Even at fifteen years old, he still manages to collapse anywhere when he gets tired.”
*howls* it's so damned cute! Hell, I know boys that do that into their 20s!
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay *sings* Malik got his lemon!
“He won’t take this lightly, Ryou. Be prepared for anything. You know Bakura may have changed, but he is still Bakura. He can be unpredictable.”
Ding ding ding ding ding Understatement of the year award goes to Malik Ishtar!
“You pulled my pants off and threw your boxers onto the front lawn. Honestly, Itemri…..what if a kid came by and saw your underwear on the lawn?”
*falls over laughing* Lawn Ornaments! *cackles*
“What is it with you and contorting your lovers like a pretzel? You know, Ishtar, there are some ways that men were not meant to bend.”
*pauses to drool* Ooooo flexible, bennnnndy
“How long does this last, mother? I’m so tired of feeling sick in the morning!”
*snickers* Can't wait till she starts hearing the horror stories about the women who have morning sickness for at least 6 months.
Aten opened the front door and heard a cry of pain.
“ATEN, THAT’S MY HEAD YOU HIT!” Robbie cried out in pain.
*falls over laughing hysterically* Took his mind off his foot for a moment though!
“Why not do something radical like…..enjoy a day off from school?”
“And do nothing?”
Ummm, am I the only one who thinks he's beginning to sound like Seto?? *smirks*
Aten snickered. ‘After his reaction to the video in health class, I wouldn’t be surprised if doesn’t want to be anywhere near the delivery room.’
*laughs* I can see him reaching for Seto's stomach medication.
No rage.
No movement.
Just…..stillness.
Eeep *dives for the nearest bomb shelter*
Marik and Malik didn’t see the fast hand that connected with Bakura’s cheek.
whoa.... Ryou walloped Bakura? Shiiiiit, he's gonna pay for that.
"And I refuse to be the monster to my kids that you used to be to me.”
Oooooo and there's the punch.
“Bakura?” Ryou looked around. “’Kura?”
Silence.
Ohhh boy...
Yami laughed. “Time to pin some dirt on Bakura.”
*snort* and it gets worse....
“This is only the beginning,”
I'm thinking that Yami's not gonna have to do much pinning of dirt. Bakura's doing a good job of getting dirty himself.
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... honestly? what are hte odds that the baby's is umi? what if the baby is keith's? either way... yami is kinda doinga favor for aria. but, and you can delete this review if you want sicne this is your story, but damnit aria use a fucking condom!! its girls like you that have no future because they are so honry to get laid!! again i apologize for this. and otogi, can we say world's biggest motuh and i don't mean in the yaoi way. but as sick as this sounds, it's a kinda blessing in disguise. poor helpless child... and the birthing video. i know how hte kids feel. i didn't see it under my second year of bio in college and the entire class was still grossed out. no wait, we show how hte eyes and ejactulationw orks but it still grossed us out. laterz.
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*beats the crap out of Yami* You do not interfere with Aria's pregnancy! She's already as freaked out as she could be! *beats him more* Heh sorry. I needed to get that out of my system. I just hope Bakura won't murder her...