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for What Goes Around (Comes Around)

by kerrysaulters

person angelus_dieing
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finish the damn story! I've read the first story and i would really like to know what the hell happens to the yami's. And please de make it A) spiteful, B) hilarious, C)whatever the hell you want, just finish the damn story. I'm seriously dieing 0_-.
person anubiset
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can`t wait to see the yami`s during pregnancy, that is going to be fun. Great story.
person heyy13
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o First chappy is interesting... just wondering if ali is self insertion or and oc... Either way i dont realy mind but i would like to know... XP Keep it up i dont have time to read the next chappy yet so i will review it later..

CONTINUE! heyy13..
person aspiker
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping for a sequel. Great to see there is one! 8-)

Since the yami's are so wiped, will Yugi, Ryou, and Malik be the level headed ones? Or will there be mass confusion (and sickening cravings 8-P ) throughout the land...

aspiker
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No not poor Bakura. Ryou maybe but why Bakura? It will be interesting to see how the hikaris take this. >^^<
person Nomalaz
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Fainting yamis and hikaris! (runs into closet and starts tossing out random items) You can't pass up an oppertunity like this! Where's a video camera when you need it?!
person mofaf
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the start. I would have loved to seen that video too, all three yami's fainting at once. It will be interesting to see how Yami gets even with Bakura and Malik once this is all over (you know he's gonna try).

I always expected the hikaris to be the 'moms' so it is nice to see the yamis in that situation instead.

Poor little hikaris don't know if they are going to be able to handle all this, though maybe their yamis will realize how nice it is to have their little lights around. Gotta wonder if the yamis are gonna buck up and take it like women or if they are gonna run their poor little hikaris into the ground and take it like men (never knew a man that could handle being sick for very long, and even a common cold is too much to put up with for a week).

person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Muhahah!!! I can see the 3 hikari's faint!!!!!! It would be awesome if the hikaris at some point had to get pregnant too. *covers mouth* Bad brain. *smacks head* Hehehe. Another great chapter.
person Nomalaz
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEE!! You made a sequel! I can see Yami strangeling both Marik and Bakura. Poor Jou, poor hikaris, poor entire Kaiba mansion residence and employees! Chocolate milk and pickles anyone?
person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whee!!!! ^-^ Been waiting for this! But why poor Bakura?!? Why poor Marik/Malik, whichever you call him?!?! It's not fair to them!!!!! *whines* Want to read the update soon! Please!!!! *whimpers, puppy dog eyes*