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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice! a bit conceited at first but it had a kinda good ending. the death of gramps wasn't forseeable to me but *shrugs* interesting none the less
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I adore this pairing there isnt enough of it!
Yes. Gramps is annoying but.. ew. Pointy object rape.. o.0 *twitch* lol.
Hilarious too. Lmfao @ Marik chewing through ropes.
...it does smell like old people.. ew.
Yes. Gramps is annoying but.. ew. Pointy object rape.. o.0 *twitch* lol.
Hilarious too. Lmfao @ Marik chewing through ropes.
...it does smell like old people.. ew.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!! I almost died laughing at Marik having to chew through the ropes cos his whore passed out. So funny.
The citrus was great too *wink* niicely done.
Yeah, um just so you know, i highly doubt anyone will care about grandpa dying. HES SO MEAN! How DARE HE hit Bakura *grumbles*
And yeah, it does smell like old person here. lmao
The citrus was great too *wink* niicely done.
Yeah, um just so you know, i highly doubt anyone will care about grandpa dying. HES SO MEAN! How DARE HE hit Bakura *grumbles*
And yeah, it does smell like old person here. lmao
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just gotta say that the conclusion is both freaky and awesome...I thought the fic was good all the way through and then when I read the end I thought it was awesome! Love the fic! One of my favourties and I love the pairing...Yami with Bakura is he best!
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow the title says it all bravo not too shaby
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!! I'm glad I came back and read it!! There's one thing that still puzzles me...who killed grandpa? In a way I'm thinking about Kura...and in another way Yami Marik. Ahh, but who cares anyways. This is a great story! I throughly enjoyed it and I can't wait to read more of your fics.
Ja!
Ja!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. I've only read chapters 1 and 2 so far, but believe me I will return to finish! I'm caught on it and how Atemu and Bakura just keep meeting up in some of the oddest places and getting away with their VERY erotic sexual encounters.
Ja!
Ja!
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi its my first time reveiwing but i do read your storiees I liked this one the best . I likw thw bakura yami togetherness they do have a lotin comon . So was Atem the one that killed the old man ssince he was nice to him and spared him whin yugis grand pa went in side atems tomb. then the old man turns on him just beccasued he likees Bakura and made him choose. . that would bemotive anoth . ii hoope yyou do a sequal.
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad but I would've liked more of a reaction from Yugi at the death of his grandfather..as well as the position he'd been put in because of his grandfather's bigotry. Interesting idea...hope to see more of you on AFF!!!
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it i think for somebody who was wringin it you sure did a god job.