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I still say that Anubis must die. Now I say that his brak Akil must die too. Evil little shit.

"Your soldiers are ill, it is YOUR job to see that they are brought back to health."
*snorts* a priest knows more about running an army than the general does. Figures.

“Look at all the mommies!”
*laughs* cuuuuute

“Nighty-night, Seth! Have good dreams about stuff that smells nice!” Aria called to him as she waved to him.
*cracks up* that's just too damned cute!!

Anubis must die. He's really beginning to be annoying. That's all I have to say about him.

I feel sorry for Aten. Poor kid. I'd forgotten that he meets Marik. Totally spaced that.

Awwwwww, he made a new friend. That's so cute.

Seriously, Anubis must die.

Kat

Brilliant story, please update soon XDD

thanks the decent gods for the high priest. and i hope yami rots in the deepest bowls of ammut's stomach one of these days. i hate royalty who thinks women can't rule it's pathetic! aye well it's sweet to see that aten has taken a liking to the priest. he even said 'da!' so cute ^^ and poor little aria. i still think bakura should have at least cut off that whore mongel's dick off and shove it up his ass to see how he likes it. godess i am bloody minded today...

*reads first half* I'm so glad Khalfani dies painfully....

The baby looked up at Seth and smiled.
“Are you a happy boy today?”
“Ahh! Da!”
AWWWWW sooo cute!

“Who’s a big boy?”
The baby squealed and laughed.
*falls over howling* Ohhhh the visuals of tough, strong Seth doing this... just too fricken' funny!!!

Seth narrowed his eyes at her. “I will return the child when I’m ready.”
oooooo somebody's pushy.....

Yami looked at the thin child. “Such radical thinking hardly becomes a High Priest, Seth.”
*snorts* get knotted pharaoh.

‘This is the life,’ he thought as he relaxed.
*laughs* spoiled priest.

yeesh everyone is jsut plain evil!! well i'm glad marik was able to help his partner's lover and was able to help baby aria. not the same as holding your own flesh and blood but more or less the same. oh god he forcsed himself on her when she was so close?! gross and dangerous!! i really love this story and i can't wait for more. brought down by a female, HA!!! he would be so pathetic but this female can kick anyone's ass to the deepest pit of hell.

i think i reviewed on mm.org but can't remember... anyway, oh course a girl is gonna kick your butt pharaoh!! you lousy, passy ass, yellow belly, back stabbing COWARD!!! you don't even deserve to be called a human being!! *burning white-hot wiht anger* sorry but, shesh! lets jsut say i cannot wait for the rest. except but i have to flush out my nose. being sick bites.

Good so far! Damn, you've really upped the score on making yami a complete bastard. I'd forgotten how much I hated Khalfani. He really did deserve to die. Glad it happened.

Anubis' wife... pity she didn't die painfully.

Kat

Good beginning. I already hate Anubis! Poor wee Aten. Ah, but Seth and Veria, like them. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Kat